Beautiful! Absolutely breath taking. I can't believe I skipped it before. I'm definately going to read all your kuro-fics now... :D

i love all your kuoshitsuji stories!(going back to the beginning of fanfiction & trying to catch up

Ah, the chess references!

Perfect for Kuroshitsuji!

I really like the way you wrote it! Great Job!

A.k.u.r.a.

Great use of metaphors but without killing it. Well done

You are so good. I just read Nature Boy and I'm not starting with your oldest fic - newest fic. I think you are God. I loved the symbolism. You have a great way with words.

Wow, that had impact written all over it. The chess metaphor is striking, the emotion is expressed well. It is seemingly subtle, but when you take time to digest it, the impact takes a startling effect. The ending with Sebastian kinda reminds me of episode 3 of the anime (in terms of atmosphere and emotion) so this is 10/10!

Chess metaphors are always so delicious, no matter what series I find them in...if that series happens to contain a pretty boy and his sexy butler, well that's just a plus...it's nice to find someone writing into that metaphor so skillfully as well. I really enjoyed this.

I love this. So beautiful and true.

0.0 am I sick for finding that hot? I liked it but it tore my fangirly heart out all at once. - I loved the symbolizim and the mirrorred thoughts of the two. I also was quite taken with the description you used for the rain. That whole dipiction made me shiver. And evil sebastian is fun and very very smexy! You write him so well.

Thier conversation made me smile and want to cry all at once, you really made me just want to huggle Ciel and maybe throw both him and Sebastian into a small closet together... nekid... with the mol3 rat beh behs... LOL Anyway another masterpiece I must say. - I can't wait for more!

waome likeWE

worthless .

*tilts head*i completely agree with everything you say. the kind is the most worthless piece in the chess board. its the weakest yet most important.

i suppose degrading ciel to that is good.

keep it up

i really liked the style and the slow rhythm. and the chess metaphor. it's such a nice idea and so perfect for them (total canon yay). does it sound weird but it was very kuroshitsuji-ish? ...it fitted with the characters and the scenario. well. i liked it a lot.

Oh my goodness-this was absolutely s.t.u.n.n.i.n.g!

I'm just getting into Kuroshitsuji, and this was the very first fanfic I've read for the anime/manga-and I couldn't have been luckier!

I love the descriptions you put in here, as well as the way you captured their characters-not once did either of them seem the least bit OOC, in thought or dialogue.

And the storyline was just perfect for these two; because that's precisely what their contract subjects them to.

Wonderful, wonderful job! I hope to read future fics of this series from you.

Jessie