Amazing. This was beautifully written. The usage of each words... Agh! It's amazing. I enjoy all of your L/J fics. Great work

Again, Beautiful. That could be used for prettey much any passionate hate to love story. Well Done!
Kamai6

Love "moments too sweet or too sour to qualify as moments between friends," so apt!

If you were going for light, I'd say you failed. This is the kind of emotion that people dream of experiencing, and it is astounding how you managed to capture it on a whim.

you tried? YOU TRIED?! you bloody well did! and it sure worked let me tell you lol. anyway this was very unique...in a good way. *claps* job well done!

You write beautifuly!

It's so lovely and sweet. It just seem sso believable and your writing style is very tender, you treat the topic really well, and ugh!! LOVED IT!

I thought it was really really good:) a very well-written piece xx

THAT IS SO AWESOME.
It really is.
By the way.
And yeah, I know, don't blow up your ego anymore. But hey, I'm reviewing, right? ;)

That was awesome. It was beautifully written, and even without giving us the names of your characters, we were able to figure out who the story was on. Great job!

I really liked it! It was so deep, so natural, so original; I've read very few L/J stories so... stylistic. It's abstract, but you portrayed it such a sweet way, moving from one thing to another slowly and precisely, making your readers smile along. It got me engrossed, and I really love how you brought it across with those lovely metaphors and expressions. Here, have a cookie. ;)

hm, interesting.

Hey, I dunno what you're talking about. It didn't just "work", it totally kicked butt! I really like this one. It's slow and sweet with just the right amount of awkward. Perfect!
-k

It did work, don't worry!
Beautiful story especially the last line
Loved this, especially because its when Lily and James weren't quite together but were getting there :)
Great song too
-Knight 03

i find these types of stories hard to write, but you made it seem effortless. im impressed. write again soon!

~Serindraxx~