 hippysheep 2009-10-02 . chapter 1very, very, VERY interesting...might there be a continuation? =) |
 kitcat19us 2009-07-30 . chapter 1great story |
 The Confused One 2009-06-05 . chapter 1I really do love this. She was truly restrained here. LOL Cause I really, really would have beat the crap out of him. He's such a dork, and he's right. He has to get his act together. But I'm hopeful. I think he will now. I think they might, hopefully, be able to start making progress. FABULOUS work as always. :) |
 Yazzmin 2009-04-07 . chapter 1amazing do another one |
 cifan 2009-03-01 . chapter 1I really liked this.
I was thinking, what might be an interesting follow-up is to expand on the prompt. Maybe show us what happened to have him say "you already did that, remember". I mean...I KNOW what 'happened', but I'd love to see you give us the background of that. Just a thought.
Oh, and your summary cracked me up: "Goren does something really stupid." I giggled, I could only imagine what the heck he's done now! |
 rindy713 2009-03-01 . chapter 1that was intense! i was afraid it wasn't going to get fixed in time, but i think they're going to be ok now ...
very nice one-shot! you got a lot done in a short span. |
 BASRIC 2009-02-28 . chapter 1As per usual, well written. I liked it. |