Nice to know someone else likes the original BGC, also adding the English Lyrics from "Konya Wa Hurricane" was an excellent touch. I like your style.

You are right in your comments - we do need more good BGClassic fics. This is a good one, and from a longtime fic writer of the old school too :)

Really really like this. The idea of needing to get out, but not sure how... I can relate in a very big way. The vulnerable Priss is also something that doesn't get explored a lot either. I agree with your assessment on original BGC ova fiction, but if you do a little searching around you'll find some great stuff, like the BG-Zone series, The MASSIVE Illusions novel and a half, and some other interesting things. Can't wait for chapter 2, I've subscribed!

Y'know what, I really like this. This is a side of Priss I don't think a lot of authors have explored. Many of them write her as the stereotypical angry girl, but you've tapped into her more tender side, her more vulnerable side, and I really like the result.

If you were to write more BGC fic I'd be first in line to read it ^_^