Lovely little drabble. Its nice to see Narcissa recovering from scandal and whispers in the presence of everyone's favorite blond.

short, but really briliant. I totally love this.

I really loved this- not many fic characterise Narcissa as the quiet one and I think it suits her.

short... but nice
i like it
and lucius malfoy... goods help me...he's the man!

The last line clinched it. :D

I enjoyed reading it very much! Can't wait to read more of your work!

Your Narcissa is very alive here, in that you have given her a true voice, and a rather likable one too - it is quite hard to balance Narcissa's snootiness with her fragility and her unheralded depth of character, but I think you've done it well. =)

Thank you for sharing.

What a wonderful snapshot of Narcissa 'before'. I love that she's squicked by her mother's posturing, and that there's already interest when Lucius arrives (and knows who she is.) Your last line is exquisite.

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Incredibly cute. I love it!

I loved this. You should consider writing some more stories! :)
-LEMONSKY4

I really liked the look into Narcissa and how she felt about her sisters. I like the idea of her being the quiet one of the Black sisters, and a bit of a loner. I especially love that young Narcissa, loner as she is, hates being paraded in front of all those men.

The mother reminds me of Pride and Prejudice, with Mrs Bennett, which is a good thing, I assure you.

this could be really good, keep going

You had best have intentions to continue this. You have a gift and you should be writing. All the time. Quite a knack for getting into the heads of the characters quite well.