Just read this whole thing and I wanted to say this story is great. I hope you haven't abandoned this, too many good JH stories have already been left unfinished.

I really enjoy this fanfic. This chapter in particular was magic.

Please update, this story is amazing, i love it. The characters you've created are brilliant, i dont like alex anymore but that's just cause i'm rooting for Jackie and Hyde. I've never saw the movie, but i think i can guess right now that this sotry is going to have a sad ending.

Btw.. i got the buffy reference straight away. Please Update! x

Do you know what it's like to get caught up into a story and then find out there are no more chapters after fourteen?!
I DO! WTH!

:) So if you wouldn't mind writing more of this amazing story that would be greatly appreciated.




~~Sincerly~
Auhtor of Sam's Gift

:( I don't want you to stop this story. I really like this idea. I think it really is one of the best Jackie-Hyde ideas you can come up with. :)

I don't trust Jackie because I know she'll end up with Hyde. Stupid Alex. :( He's a butt for ruining the great Jackie and Hyde moment.

Please do continue. :) Till the next review! (Hopefully! :| )

The first thing that popped into my head after reading this chapter was: Aww, that was so sweet! The Jackie/Hyde moments were just too precious for words—and the parallels between them and Robin/George were both masterful and heartbreaking. The best part of this chapter (and in my opinion, one of the best moments in this story) was the dance between Robin and George to the “old people music” and the resulting connection that flowed between Jackie and Hyde. That moment was just so poignant—I love, love, loved it! I loved it so much I had to go back and read it all over again. That was an awesome bit of writing there—well done!

Okay, enough gushing about my fav part. I believe some other stuff happened as well…such as Alex barging in to ruin another oh-so-lovely J/H moment. I like Alex—he was supportive of Jackie at a time when she really needed it (you know, after everyone back in Point Place became blinded by a certain stripper and let her down). However, with Hyde back in the picture, Alex doesn’t quite measure up. Not to mention, I’m getting the feeling Alex isn’t really as in love with Jackie as he thinks he is.

Finally, I want to commend you on your characterization of Hyde. You’ve done a great job of taking him from the major jackass that the writers made him in Season 8 and maturing him into someone willing to own up to his actions and take responsibility. And the best thing is—you haven’t lost the character of Hyde and what makes him great. For instance, he’s man enough to coax Jackie into playing guitar but he’s not above taunting “Alexandra.”

And on that note, I conclude my wordy review and await your next chapter:)

good chapter. I love the jackie hyde. update asap

I loved this chapter, so full of passion and angst! It was truly wonderful, I love how you made Jackie open up to Steven, as I'm sure that she never told anyone except George about what happened with her father. I love the way this story is going, and it is so beautifully written, it makes me crave the next chapter, just to see what is going to happen. Please keep updating, and keep on writing, as your writing is beautiful, descriptive and just plain brilliant!

I love this story! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! Update soon...awesome story.

I am really enjoying this story. And I think you are a very good writer because evne though I lvoe Jackie and Hyde together at the begining I was actually rooting for Jackie to forget him and move on with her life but now Hyde is slowly starting to worm his way back. I am actually starting to root for him again. I also love that you kept him so well in character.

Can't wait to read more. I really hope you update soon

So this is the first time I have read your story I'm up in the middle of the night reading this and I just have to say that I LOVE IT! I can't wait to see what happens! So I have to admit that at first I was like well I like Alex and Jackie they sound cute but then he seems like a jerk now and it will always be about Steven and Jackie. I'm happy that she's making him pay for everything that he has done for her but its just so sad, that I can't help but feel sorry for him. I am glad that Jackie went back to invite Steven to the beach a breakthrough YaY! Anyways I can't wait until your next update...hopefully soon!

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I love how you make the story come alive, make it just jump off the page. I cannot wait to see what will happen, the suspense is killing me! Please update soon!

Great job, as always. Short and sweet, you continue to move the story along in that wonderful style of yours. You have a way of writing that draws readers into the story. For me, the best thing about this chapter was the interaction between Hyde and George. The dialogue was both amusing and informative. It’s apparent how much they both care for Jackie. Also, I must say, your characterization of Hyde here was superb.

I loved this part:

“You are such a bastard,” Hyde informed George.
“Interesting social skills you have there, Steven. Do you talk to all your employers that way?”
“I’m self-employed,” Hyde said.

Really enjoyable banter going on there. And I totally agree with Hyde. George really should tell Jackie what’s going on.

As for Alex—I sensed there was something more to the story at the end of Chapter 10. Alex was too perfect there for a minute. George even seems to have doubts about Jackie’s new “fashion accessory” (as Hyde so eloquently put it). Alex might be a nice guy, but he doesn’t get under Jackie’s skin like Hyde. I mean, Jackie seems to be more concerned with what the other girls think of Hyde than she is about Alex.

Finally—I adored how Jackie reached out to Hyde at the end & I’m looking forward to seeing what you have in store for Jackie and Hyde.

Aww... Jackie wants Hyde to be a part of the group! Yay! It is gonna be ruff on Jackie whe her dad dies. But Hyde will love her up.

Oh, and the only "dick" out of those peole is Alex. I hate him more and mre with every chapter. He's a pig. I don't like him at all.

That's it. Till next time!

yay!! Hyde is in!! :)