This story was pretty good... Just some of the last couple chapters seemed quite disjointed. Some of what happened really wasn't very obvious.

Aw, cute. And sad. And all that good emotiony stuff. :) Does this mean there's hope for a new future? (Sorry for missing the last couple chapters... it was unintentional, I assure you.) Awesome story and thanks for writing!

So strange and unresolved yet totally resolved and epic. The first half especially about Sally was neat, and I loved the last two lines. Crazy, crazy story - great job!! :D

~Red

What! THAT was the end!? How is that the end! Ok, epilogue, yes please!

This was such a different and original story. I'm not 100% sure I get everything that went on, but I really liked reading every chapter of it anyway even if I felt confused sometimes. This chapter has some especially well written and hilarious Captain Hammer thoughts/dialogue/narration.

Excellent job!

~Red

hm I just reviewed but it didn't post so sorry if this double posts. Now onto the review

wha?

I'm sorry but that is my thought when i finished this story.

Simply wha?

I get that penny thing she got shoved back into past. hopes dashed, and all that. And wha on sally? but all around huh?

It just made no sense to me. It was so abrupt.

Put it this way. The rest of the story was like skipping through a field of flowers. Its beautiful, wonderful charming. I'm having a wonderful time. Then, suddenly outta no where BAM! A steel door slams right on my face. This story was so fun to read, so cute and charming. I was loving it and i couldn't wait to see what came next. I didn't review EVERY chapter but i loved it. And now i'm not so sure. The ending was a steel door slammed on the face of my skipping. If you can, write teh epologue because this left so much to be told, so much to be explained so much to be resolved. It was just... so abrupt. So sudden. Like a pretty bird, that was chirping on a branch then WHAM! A cat eats it. You know? It was beautiful but it just ended like that. In a very confusing way.

I'm sorry to bring you down. I can still look back at the field of beautiful flowers and skip the way i had come, but i'll always be able to look at the steel door that blocked my way to the pasture of flowers that was a nicely explained ending...

Sorry! I still love you!

He saw Penny on the screen? Wha-What?!

Also, even though that last sentence was long, I liked it. It was neat and clever sounding, if slightly run-on.

So Rose Red is stuck in the Lab with some other heroes... hmm. What is going to happen next!?

~Red

Ooh, and the plot continues with a dash of angst. Nice job--thanks for writing!

..LOVE AND PEACE...sorry I thought of Trigun.

This story is one of the best Dr. Horrible fics I've read so far. The story just seems natural, and fits in very well with the universe and the characters. I like how Dr. Horrible is doing "evil good", using evil methods to fix mistakes in one small section of society. I can really tell you thought everything through.
Even your OC's like Sally are good, and it's takes a lot for me to approve of an OC. But she's not Mary Sue-ish at all, and becomes more compelling the more I read from her perspective.
And your writing is great! Some of the descriptions give me shivers.
Please update soon! I can't wait to see how everything works out.

She told him! *pumps fist in the air* :D Of course, I can't wait to see what happens next, but I have faith in Billy-buddy and I am STILL hoping for a happy ending. :3 Thanks for writing. I really like this.

Dunno about the quote - all I can think of is "These Boots Are Made For Walking" which is not even close, LOL.

Oh, very cool chapter. So Sally revealed herself and sort of lost the guts to do anything to him, but it didn't matter, he already fell into the trap. What's gonna happen next?!

~Red

Ooh, good job. I'm still hoping for a happy ending for Sally and Billy. ^^

Oohh... I'm excited for the next chapter. What's going to happen (or not happen?) with Penny?!

And Hammer is such a tool. I could totally imagine him mowing down that cupcake.

Each other should be one word! Lol. If I ever get the chance to change the dictionary, I'd change the spelling of the word "phonetically" b/c it's meaning is to spell a word like it sounds, so should that word therefore be spelt how it sounds? Something like, fanetickally. *shrug* Anyways. :P

Update soon!

~Red

Haha, awesome. I love it. But do mine eyes deceive me or has Horrible just become a possible love interest? :o >:) I like this chapter, a lot. Great job and thank you for writing!

Love the chappie. And of course we all know why he REALLY wants to travel back in time. ^_^ But i kinda almost sense Rosy getting a little crush on the doc. Perhaps i may be right? :P