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Admiral R.T 7/20/03 . chapter 6
Tell Muse-chan he BETTER give you ideas for your Robotech story!
Koga's Girl 6/18/03 . chapter 5
This is a very well written fic. I've recommended it to all my friends, and so far it seems they like it as well. Everything is so well organized, and the way everything is described, it makes you feel as if you were there in the middle of everything.

Just one question: What happens to Oscar?
Gwylam 4/17/03 . chapter 5
Very powerful piece. Masterfully done. I hope you will continue writing for this fandom.
Famira Damaris 1/11/03 . chapter 5
...Wow. That's really all I can say. I always passed this story on - despite the fact I love Bright - thinking it would lead into Zeta and I would have absolutely no idea what was going on. But curiosity got the better of me and I read it. Very well done. Characterization was great, although I was sad because it was (relatively) short. Your work is fantastic. XD *bows down* Bright/Mirai is always a plus.
RougeBaron 3/24/02 . chapter 1
A true masterpiece.

My only concern is that on June 9 Bright was heavily wounded, lost 12 hours of conciousness, but on June 10, he got well enough to do shadow boxing. I don't mean to be a smart ass, but my mom was a nurse, so I know exactly that human body doesn't heal at that rate. Unless, you assume that medical science has become so advance. In that case, I stand corrected.

I hope I can see more of your work in the future.
Shadow Chaser 3/11/02 . chapter 6
Great story! I'm so glad that I found it! It has little plot intricacies (sp) that made me want to read more. And its done by the POV of one of the best characters in the Gundam UC Universe, Bright Noah! _ I like the subtle romance hidden within the writings and the reference to Shiro Amada was a great, but small tribute. Looking for more to read by Bezerkerprime! Keep it up!
Lady Une-chan 2/19/02 . chapter 6
Konnichiwa! I've decided to review your fic again because I LOVE it and the little thing you added! (I printed the entire thing out, you I can read it again and again!) Sayonara!
Fallen Angel 2/12/02 . chapter 5
I've been reading this and I love it. I really liked how you put in the 08th MS Team and I ask that in the chapter where the real battle begins if you could put in the )8th team and have them, Shiro, and Ainna in her machine {Absollice?} help the White Base fight. Anyway, great and continue.
Lady Une-chan 2/11/02 . chapter 5
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing a story about Bright. He and Mirai are my favorite characters!
volta arovet 1/21/02 . chapter 5
This was an amazing story. It was very well set up, you stayed true to the personalities of the canon characters and created believable and interesting original characters, and the plot was wonderfully complex without becoming confusing. Marvelous job, I hope you continue to write MSG stories.

-Val
dillpops lazy 1/8/02 . chapter 5
Great! Well yes even though I've never watched this series of gundam u introduced the characters well with the plot and it was all very well put together, write another!
dillpops 1/8/02 . chapter 2
geeee! good ficness berz! gotta read more chapters now!
kishiria 1/6/02 . chapter 5
Great story! I know authors love feedback, so...

I like how this is a White Base story that isn't all, or even mostly, about Amuro. Bright's one of my favourites, so I was happy to see him get the story where he's the mover and shaker.

I'm not clear, though, on why after this, and with his background, he becomes a career soldier. I'm assuming it's because this experience has shown him how important it is to "stay human" as a soldier and that he decides to apply this life lesson?

Oh, and what happened to Oscar? The print on the site is small and a bit hard to read, so maybe I missed it, but last I saw, he was captured.

Anyway, the best thing you conveyed was the family White Base became and the support they give each other. I particularly liked how you compared Sayla, in her red mobile suit, to her tragically isolated brother.

A big story with a big heart. Thank you.
Too Lazy To Log In 12/20/01 . chapter 1
Hey folks! Author here! Wanted to respond to the last review, but there's no e-mail. T_T

Don't worry, I wouldn't do that to Gundam. Just wait for it, it'll all come out in Chapter four. Until then, if you want a hint about it, the key to the overall theme of this sucker is in the Gunmarauder. _

Thanks to you and everyone else for the reviews! _

Berz.
NinjaZeo10 12/20/01 . chapter 3
I can't say that I understand why they're invading Side 6. I know that it was neutral in the war, and that eventually NT-1 Alex was moved there near the end of the war. I'm just hoping you justify the invasion sometime. Something beyond "revenge" or "lust for power." Mobile Suit Gundam's always been more than that.

On the plus side, I love reading your characters interact with each other. You've nailed characterization pretty well. Bright Noa's always seemed underdeveloped to me, though that may be because I mostly rely on the movie compilations.

And as always, it's great to see someone write something in the UC continuity. Keep up the good work.
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