maybe you should update your other stories?

Great chapter. It is plotted well and written even better. Thank you for updating. I have come to love this story and cannot wait for the next chapter. I would like to congratulate you on another wonderful story.

Yay.

I was a little bit worried that something would happen to prevent the implantations.

The poor doctor - it was so mean to have him interview with Jack. But after Jack everything else is almost normal isn't it?

The conversation over coffee was excellent. And who was using sharpies on the pots, hm?

I am happy you updated. I like the character Dr Wiseman. And I am glad that Veronica is going through with helping the Jaffa. I also hope until she is ready to have sex she continues to use frozen sperm samples to create more Tok'ra larva. And while I think subconsciously Malek wants it to be Lineare's consort. I don't think Lineare or Veronica are going to go for that and there is just no spark there.

good update, nice job of bringing in an outsider, I really like that kind of stuff

I still like this tale. It is nice to see an SG story that doesn't involve a firefight or impending doom every time.

This chapter is so awesome! Veronica finally is talking about her past, and Malek doesn't seem like he's going to get his way any time soon. ::grin::

Looking forward to the next chapter!

~Innogen

So excited to see a new chapter of this - your characters give me hope.

Pushy pushy Malek - nice smackdown.

The conversation between Malek and Linare at the end really highlights so much of what has always been at issue in the relationship between the Tau'ri and the Tokra.

The Malek slapdowns - oh yeah!

Teal'c and Jack as the explainers was an interesting choice. Kinda took things in different directions.

I have to go back to work but I'm gonna come back and read the rest as soon as I get a chance. This is great.

I saw this story listed on delicious and decided to come take a look. Wow! It hits so many emotional highs and lows, its hard to imagine you'll be able to keep the tension level so high going forward, but I'm looking forward to it.

Delicious.

The set up is great, the character(s) intriguing.

This deserves more reviews than its getting. It was nice that Veronica got to say goodbye to two of her teammates. I think Lineare's comments over Veronica's choice of dinner what hilarious. Now that Veronica has been granted the right to say on earth what will she do with her time? Now that she has also been given a medical discharge? What will she now do with her time?

I don't think pissy begins to cover it. Even on paper the 'if looks could kill' really comes through.

Oh WOW. Not that this really covers it but even after regaining my powers of speech nothing else even comes close.

The interaction between Lineare and Malek is excellent.