 Hahukum Konn 2009-08-30 . chapter 1I really like this. :D I especially like how applicable it is to Don Draper. :) |
 mrscribble 2009-08-13 . chapter 1I love how this perfectly reflects the front that Don especially holds up... I wish I could describe what I mean but I really don't know how to put it into words. Wonderful. |
 Penny Dreadful 2009-04-10 . chapter 1 Great! The last sentence made it, of course! Perfect tone. Just very well done. |
 Clockwork-Hobo101 2009-03-21 . chapter 1Oh, I loved this. There was something so detached about the way you wrote it, which for me works perfectly with the show-- that slow, pacing that's very controlled; nothing frenzied or rished about it. Really fantastic. |
 wildcard47 2009-03-14 . chapter 1 Oh, this was lovely! You captured the atmosphere of SC and it's hidden underworld so skillfully.
Favorite line:
"The Sterling Cooper man is strong. He goes out and parties with gorgeous women with his clients one night, and then gets up and goes to work looking pristine...When he goes out, he makes sure his date's cocktail looks more dressed up than his own, because women should have a little flash in their lives."
Very well done. |
 The Modren Man 2009-03-01 . chapter 1MAD MEN FIC! What a rare sighting. Not enough written, that you are right.
Now, to say that you honor the creators of Mad Men, I cannot verify. Heck, I can't verify if I've honored the creators. But you did a fantastic, utterly fantastic job. I subtly saw the ending coming from the fact that all the men at Sterling Cooper never do fit the guidelines of the Sterling Cooper man.
The repetition works, although it did seem overboard in some of the shorter sentences. Then again, I am guilty of that. The details to seem to pull it all together.
Was an enjoyable read and I'm glad it's an addition to this small collection of stories. |
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