I love it!

AWW! the ending was soo sad yet sweet! i was almost in tears!

Simply amazing! I cannot seem to stop the tears trailing down my cheeks! Do write more of Peter Pan! You portray each of the characters with much passion! Please continue writing!

Yes Becky it was utterly awful do better next time... >.<KIDDING OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE BEST THING I'VE READ IN YEARS! YOU SHOULD BE AN AUTHOR FOR PETE'S SAKE. BUT WHAT'S MAKING ME UTTERLY MINDFULL IS WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS NOW! OK thank you for that awesome reading, loved it, wouldn't change it, awesome, and love you see you soon :D

Hey Cleo!
Thank you for your PM, I saw it today.

I've just read your story and i like it a lot. I also like the poem! It's a good idea, isn't it? I think poems go really well with these kinds of fairy tale stories. And you did a great job. Keep it up :-)

Omg, that was a very good ending. Great story and job. I hope to see another peter pan's fic from you.

zephirus

WOW.
This is such an amazing story!
Based on a brilliant poem.
I've really enjoyed this story, thanks 4 writing it.
So sad, bt so nice as well!
I guess thats pretty much a summary of the actual story of nPeter Pan anyway.
The name Birch is really gd as well!
Compliments & fairy dust
RandomObsessive
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So beautiful! I cryed!

Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ OMG This chapter is so awesome! Hurry with the next chapter!! This story is amazing! I love it so much! Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ

Peace cuz I'm outtie
~BFFofCrazyShopoholicPixie-Alice

Oh. Love. I liked how you made it makes sense why Peter was forgetting the boys and Wendy...and his short attention span made me smile.

I knew it was Tink! Well, I guessed, but I was right.

I LOVE IT!

--Keiri

ive read the first chapter and its already gorgeus! I love it!

Wow! That was amazing! update soon ASAP!

Wow! i've been waiting 4 u 2 review 4 ages, & it was definately worth it!
U know the characters so well, and this chapter made me a very happy person! I literally jumped around in my chair and grinned like a mad child 4 like 5 minutes!
Update soon please!
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awesome

Please, please, please update soon!
This chapter was AWESOME!