That was pretty good. I liked your style, though you couldve worked a bit more on the flow I guess... Thanks for writing!

wow..that was quite an idea..

but i don't want things to end that way it's so sad, forgetting everything..

That certainly does seem like a possible ending :)

Nicely written, as usual. Btw, Fei Wong Reed is Clow's brother? Real or just theory?

-I have to say though, I really really don't want that to happen. I would like Syaoran and Sakura, whichever freaken ones are still alive, I lost track, to go back to their country and torment the lovely couple Touya and Yukito, and Kurogane and Fai go back to Japan to be tormented by the awesome Sister!Couple Tomoyo and Amaraterasu. I can dream.-

Impressive One-shot!! It would be nice for them to meet in the xHolic world though, don't you think? :)

That was...impressive. I think that you have a certain skill at writing Wakanuki. I also liked how I could see this happening in future Tsubasa chapters. (But I do hope that Kuro-rin will not die! That would not be cool!)

Oh, very good prediction. I could definitely see this happening.

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Omg... CLAMP just might do something like this.. Which makes it just that much sadder. :'(

I think you could pull off writing a next chapter where they all randomly meet in the xHolic world at some coffee shop, or show how each of they're lives have changed. X3 And how Kurogane somehow can't stop thinking of this strange blond man he's never met before XD