Not having an account on here equals, as you so eloquently put it, "not having balls"?

ORLY?

Out of character, as usual. Perhaps learn a bit about character development before you completely change the personality of characters. ;)

I'm a Nina fan, don't get me wrong. But there's a lot to be said for letting your favorite characters be themselves, not OMIGODIWISHTHEYWEREEXACTLYLIKETHIS!1one!

Idiot. Anonymous idiot.

Fantastic chapter. Interesting relationships . . . UD soon (not that you don't always).

LMAO.

Your Nina is so out of character, it's not even funny. What I read of this story was corny, unrealistic, and more like an after school special than a 24 story.

There is no way any of those people would just forgive and accept Nina like that after her betrayal.

Literally on the edge of my seat. Breathe slowly . . . Well, you know the words I'm going to use (fantastic, brilliant, amazing, excellent, if you were wondering).
Where's Kim?

Perfect. Loved Curtis and Milo, such sad deaths. I always thought that , horrible as it sounds, they were the highlights of Season 6, recapturing the emotion. I wasn't to fond of the last season, it felt a bit forced, but the deaths were good, and as usual, you've made them even better.

Aww, sorry, I love Edgar. I'd like to meet his father.

I thought you wrote Nina's parents very well - the right amount of disgust at what she did, and unconditional parental love. UD soon.

Wow, okay, I'm not emotional. Honest. =)
Wow. Wow. Um. Wow. Incoherent. Um. Wow.

Wow, talk about confusing, dying - field of flowers. Some location change! As always, I love your afterlife, and you've written everyone's reactions perfectly.

A really clever way to get answers to some of the questions we wanted answers to most. I love this - I can picture it so clearly.

Excellent. I like how you've covered all their deaths and I look forward to seeing how Paul reacts when/if he finds out why he died. Marwan's reaction is perfect.

God, your chapters are so insightful. You sure you didn't study psychology? This was great. I still envy your talent of making me like a character I hate.

This is a great idea!
I love how you switched between the dying characters, and then showed them in the afterlife, and metting Nina.
Continue, continue :)

EXCELLENT!! I love it, please keep it going!! You've done a great job of accurately capturing the personalities of the characters so far. And thanks a lot for not forgetting Ryan, too many people do.

This is brilliant. It makes a lot more sense now I understand the Afterlife, please UD quickly, I'm now very very very intrigued.

WHOAH!

i love this story! it's intense and it weaves together the stories of 24 very well. i anticipate your next work...

`emily