That is great! What more needs to be said? Now on to reading your next story! Tally ho!
Kamai6

Haha, that's so cute! I really love how you write Lily and James; they're always so perfectly in character and you can feel the relationship between them rather than just read about it.

Just like all of your other work- amazing job!

Really cute! Although it sucks for Lily that he broke up with her

Hey,

Just to say I really liked this fic!
Gonna read more ;)

I though that was awesome, I really enjoyed it :D

Lol, it's cute. :)

Wow, I really liked this! It's cute and funny and I didn't see the little last convo with Fisher coming! I wish I'd thought of it, lol!

Cute! I like how the poem relates to the story.

I liked this--you definitely feel for Lily, but you can't help liking Daniel, the amiable guy he is. Interesting little one shot, these are always so much fun to read :-) Nice choice of tense, also!

ahaha, i liked this one

I liked this, especially the matter-of-fact way James told her he wasn't stalking her, thank you very much. It was really entertaining. xD

I'm kind of sad for Lily, though... mer...

OK, I like the premise of this story quite a lot. However, I got the impression that this was Daniel and Lily's first date. I don't know if that's correct, but it's what I got from it. I doubt two people interested in each other would be talking about what they want in the future for each other. I think you might have been better off having them be in a casual relationship and thinking about getting a bit more serious.

However, if that is what you intended in the first place, and I simply misread, then I REALLY like this. What Daniel said to Lily was just...
*chills* so perfect. It describes James and Lily to a T.

So, either way, I think this is good work.

P.S. I thought you should know that when I'm lacking any inspiration, I read your stories and they usually get my Harry Potter brain-juices flowing.

Haha, cute. Well, actually that would majorly suck. Having a guy break up with you after the first date? Ouch. But that's what makes it such a good story!
-k

Well Daniel was right - the chemistry between the two of them is irrefutable. You write it well.

Ah, I love the chemistry between Lily and James and you got that just right- well done
-Knight 03