A fitting tribute to one of the smaller B5 heroes that many do not pay attention to. I liked your idea for his Nightwatch credits, it is indeed an ironic fate. Your writing style and characterization was very in tune to the average guy Zach was. A few small places suffered from the flash-back syndrome of simply recounting events, mostly with the Morden incident, but the rest was very much a point-of-view portrayl, not just a transcript of the show. Thanks for this unique peak at the world of Babylon 5

very intelligent and well-written. an excellent characterisation of a minor character. thank you

Wow! I gotta say, your characterization of Zack seems to be pretty much spot-on. Very well done fic! _

Cool! :) I liked.