well that settle one problem, but they have another problem, where are they in wonderland. and where the rabbit?

ha well that was a funny chapter, and i like tummus line from aladdin

well out of one problem and into another

Me again!

Awesome!! I love this story so far! I want to go watch the movie now! Excellent twist on it, so far!

well this story has gotten my attention, i hope you will write more to this story

True to both stories. Excellently contrasted and combined.

Wonderful Work!! Keep going!!

You have a very animated vocabulary, my friend! You did a great job giving me an atmosphere of Terence and Tumnus's friendship. Tumnus seems to be very rational in thought and reality and when the white rabit comes along he sees it, but I'm sure he really-really doesn't want to confirm it or yield to it at all!