I absolutely loved the part when everyone thought Jack was going nuts because he'd told them that he'd found Jacob ...

THX

God bless you!

Thara

loved the story. great plot. plenty of intrigue. keep up the good work

I loved the story. It was sad at the beginning but in the end it was the perfect ending. Thank you for the wonderful story.

I enjoyed the story really enjoy Jack O'Neill

Loved the story but I did not like the way Jon's part of the story was handled. What's up your story sleeve?

Thanks for a great story with a good ending, liked the twist about Jon and I'm sorry he died in the end. Yeah small wedding group you couldn't really turn the President away could you. Thanks for sharing.

Wow that was an excellent story. I couldn't wait to read the next chapter. You did very well in this. I love the confusion with Jacob... But I'm here LOL

Thank you for posting this

E.

this is cool...love the humor from Ruppert

E

Great first chapter... very interesting off to read chapter 2 :D

E.

Very nice job. Thank you.

great chapter and story, keep up the good work

I never say this, but that was awesome.

Great chapter, please, please up date soon

Great chapter... you could of also added when Jack asked for jon, he could of asked to see if there is any... mini Sam about just in case loki try to clone Sam... it just a throught, please up date soon

AH! Not nice! Please update son!