I like your story very much, despite the odd error here and there, which I believe you can be forgiven, seeing as English is not your first language. I would love to fix it for you, but I am unsure how to go about it.
That said, I look forward to new instalments hopefully very soon.

So I dunno if you come on here anymore or not, but just wanted to say that I'm so glad I ran by your story again. I read it years ago and lost track of it. It's one of my favorites. :)

I know it's probably pointless but I'm going to beg anyway. COME BACK!

Wonderful story! I enjoyed every second of reading it. I wish so much you'd finish it - it'll give me more pleasure of reading about Severus and Ari, than about what happened in 7-th book... (It's so sad: thinking about his life without any hope and with such a horrible end :((...)
If you ever return here to read it - please, finish the story - no matter what happened in books, Severus deserves more - deserves to be loved and have his own "... and they lived long life together" :).

I really wish you had finished this story. It was getting so good.

What a wonderful story .. I think I started reading some hours ago .. I just finished Deathly Hallows the night before .. I love what you've done .. just how Snape would be .. Old JKR can have him fanged but let's give her credit for creating a character that our imaginations will keep eternal. Thank you so much for writing this and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. N from India

I am enjoying this story very much I hope it will continue...

Alas, why do all the good fanfiction authors have a habit to leave their best stories unfinished? :...l...(

*Awsome*

... where is the rest of it? :-D

Love it!

This is really original - I hope there is more to come.

Harry would say, "Crisps, anyone" as opposed to chips.

I really loved the story and am sad you did not finish it. IS there a chanc you might? Pleaasse!

loving it so far

OMG I think I'm in love with your writing your very descriptive and I didn't find my recent short attention span a problem ^.^'

love the story!