when did aumna become a total badass?
did i miss a chapter?

The story is getting even more intense. Can't wait to see what is next.

OH! A very creative storyline, I love undead stories! <3 I'm still trying to match the names with the characters but perhaps another few chapters will help me with that. Please continue!

"Oh sh^t, it's Wayne Brady son!"

For those of us left confused it Ansuz was just referring to the most epic moment of television ever, the day Wayne Brady took over the Dave Chapelle show and revealed his nature as a pimp, drug dealer, cop killer and just all around SCARY DUDE.

In fact, the moment was scary enough that I is reviewing your chapter... and I beta'd it. ()>>

It was really good. I can't wait for the next one. I loves Hoss and Muvad.

Please review! I know you've been here! The internet tells me so. Don't make me sick Wayne Brady on you!

...oh god...


but yeah, I'm here. And we love you, even if we don't understand you.

Cool again. Keep it up.

OH NO!
NOT WAYNE BRADY!
Great chapter, like always.

Well, after careful consideration I have decided that this chapter lacks a certain Je ne sais quoi. It could be caused by the flatness of the characters, the inconsistencies in tone, or perhaps the simple failure to use adjectives. Who did you have Beta this, a monkey? I've read Mary Sues taht were more entertaining.


Okay, okay just messing with ya. : P
I really liked the finish product and I am glad you took a few of my suggestions under consideration. I reviewed the chap like I promised I would and I look forward to reading more of this epicness that is you story.

Keep Going

If this were gameplay, what level would Aumna be?
I mean, how could she not easily take a premature, dehydrated, frail woman? Given it being a worgen.
Also, why would any of the other Death Knights draw back? One volatile worgen versus a group of trained undead that won't succumb (as far as I know) to a bite of hers.
When the four main characters (Hoss, Kiyarl, Aumna, Rev'n) were "alive", what were they? Rev'n seems rogue-ish but I'm anal and want to know for sure.
Sorry if I'm rambling.
Great chapter, great story.
And if Escalus comes by my long winded comment, I think he kicked him for assuming he killed a infant.

I think I've read this before... *evil grin*

Another great one.

Oh, what an intense chapter! but Why'd did Rev'n kick Hoss?

To quote Wicked Seraphina:

"MOAR NAO!"

W-worgen? Not at all what I was expecting! I've probably alread written you this but...your characterization and interaction are excellent; they carry the story off quite nicely.