... Are you trying to tell us something in this chapter? *coughG1!*Cough* I have no earthly idea where you're going here so I can't really think of anything to say D=

...Well other than it's interesting and hope to see more soon. But that's the norm. DX *shot* (update soon? *doe eyes*)

And the drama continues to go in deep.

C.D.

This was a very fun chapter to read my friend. I applaude you and your friend in writing this.

C.D.

I don't know if you intended this, but I was imagining Mester as G1 Jazz, with Scatman Crother's voice and everything.

...For some odd reason, I'm my own grandpa started running through my head. XD I wonder why. But seriously, I can't wait to see where this is going.

Your writing is still awsome as ever my friend.

C.D.

I'd think it were awkward too in his situation XD I hope everything is okay!! Go Jazz!!

Aw Poor Jazz... Poor Prowl...

Man the drama deepens.

C.D.

Ehehehe, I can't wait to read what happens next! Good job!

Oohh, I'm really interested in what's going to happen with this. Please update soon!

hm very interesting. Update soon!!

I'm very interested to see how this goes.

Wow. THis'll be interesting once this picks up more. I am loving this fic. BUt I mostly say that for most of your fics anyway, don't I?

C.D.

omg this is so cool WHAT?! not even a page long? whoa, I hope u at least update really soon XDXDXD Keep 'em coming!