Love it!

OMG, the ending made me so giddy. I love it

XD

Adorable! Also very well written!

Great work!

Cute! They have such adorable reactions to things they don't know, I love how it's written, totally cute!

Blushing really is like a disease...

XDXD Haha, this is funny XD Great job!

Bahahah! That was ADORABLE. xD And soo funny. It made me giggle. xD

Priceless. It was adorable. I love how they both seemed so clueless and yet not, ha!

Lmao! That's so cute

Aww, that really was cute! I love the way you write this, they're always musing at everything new like that. You described them very well, good job!

YES!(eleventypoo) Yesyesyes!

Exactly like that, except, y'know, am not so sure Natsuo and Youji are necessarily ending up as lovers. BUT you got it right anyway. Think I told you that methinks the no-pain thingy is more like hypnosis than genetic manipulation (or maybe conditioning, or maybe blocking pain/sensation receptors in the brain by a weak magic-y thingy) or why in mangadom could the *other* Zeros leave the Gameworld for the Really Real World with senses and pain-receptors intact?

Beautiffully written, luv. Me loves it muchly much. WRITE MOAR FICS! :P

Ahaha! This was great. I can't believe I've got first review when this was so awesome. O.O I love your style of writing them; you've captured the zero boys perfectly! Finally someone who writes them well. _ Keep up the great work!