Nice job, I love it. It was really good. You have a few misspellings, but thats okay,everyone makes mistakes. It would be so cool if the Shinigami was Light, that would make a huge twist. But, you gotta keep Alexander in the story. Don't fade him out or cut him out. He has so much potential. Anyway, you can do what you want. Just a suggestion. Can't wait for an update!

This is awsome! I am planning to a Death Note fanfic myself, but I am not sure if I can. I am terrible at writing, and I also don't know know too much on the details of Death Note. '-_-