Hello,

This was so heartwarming. I've always thought that it must kill Clark to not have anyone to support him fully. He has friends/co-workers as Clark Kent, he has fans as Superman, but only his parents (and Lois later) know exactly who he is. He's always seemed so lonely. I'm glad you helped him out this way. He needs someone 'outside' who will simply accept him.

Margaret strikes me as someone who would be very good for Clark as a sort of second-mother. Would you please consider writing more interaction between Clark and Margaret? Little scenes that happen between episodes maybe? Please? =)

Great writing,

The PreacherMan

Simple, elegant and nearly perfect.

Well written, good characterization and fun.

There's no action but you hardly notice the lack of it.

Left me wanting more. If you like Superman you'll love this fic. :)

I loved Margaret - speaking of crafting believable characters. ;-)

I'd love to see more of her and whether she and Clark become friends.

That last line was classic. :D

Loved your story.

Great story! It was a nice idea to pick someone already existing in the series, and not invent a completely new character. I've wondered for a long time what could have happened with the woman who saw Clark in 'pilot', and your explanation is wonderful.

Excellent Story ! And an angle I had never thought of after many years as a Lois & Clark and Smallville fan. You used the 'three rules' theme from Lois very creatively and very well. Perhaps you could write a sequel where Margaret and Lois meet, after Lois knows his secret. That might make interesting situation where Lois can discuss Clark and his disguise with someone who also missed if for a while. It might also Lois some insight into the mind of Superman before he was Superman.

Keep up the good writing!

A very good story. Poignant and moving. You took a little throwaway moment from the pilot and told us all about the character and what happened to her later.

I liked how she gave Clark hope at what must have been a very difficult time in his life. It just goes to show what happens when you cast your bread upon the waters.

Also enjoyable - the novel-writing group! Ah, yes, writing is more difficult than it looks!

Please write more L&C fic!

Very nice to see Clark from someone else's point of view.