|Reviews for Chains|
| notwolf 3/12/09 . chapter 1
Oh, that's cute-meeting as tiny children and possibly falling for each other!
| Alatarielf 3/9/09 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this, not only because it was written completely beautifully, but also because instead of leaving me with a feeling of depression that "Forsaken Love" leaves me with, this one made me feel giggly and cheerful. You have a very even, balanced style of writing - it can go from witty, and then kind of humor-y and then when poor, innocent readers are least expecting it...WHAM!, you hit them with angst. Which just shows how flexible you are as a writer, being able to write the most heartbreaking angst and then change to adorable fluff.
And Narcissa and Lucius! :D I could write an essay why that entire exchange is pure gold and should be bottled in liquid form...I'd buy it :]
You also paint a very good portrait of young Lucius. Wanting to win so much that he would trample his mother's flowers was very appropriate. And I also loved the way you chose to write this prompt. I remember making flower chains when I was little :)
| Sara 3/2/09 . chapter 1
| Lamia of the Dark 3/2/09 . chapter 1
| myppe 3/2/09 . chapter 1
that was really sweet!
| shannondaskies 3/1/09 . chapter 1
I liked the line about pretty things.