Wow. Seriously. You nailed each character's voice - Felix's single-minded teasing, Gus' easy-going/stern scolding, and even the unseen Felicity's enthusiastic primness. It's amazing how easily I could see the characters saying their lines - really true to the original writing.

It all feels very realistic too, one of those true-to-life inbetween moments. I like that it's sweet but not too sweet.

Crit (I know this is an older fic, but I hope you don't mind.):

When Felix talks - "grinned" and "sighed" technically aren't dialogue tags, so the punctuation is off there.

"I shoulda known Felicity's diary wouldn't be interesting enough to hold them" - that's the only line that felt off. "hold them" sounds a little too formal for Felix.

But those are very minor crits. This is a great read.

that was great

Oh, I just love your Road to Avonlea one shots! You are so great at staying true to the characters personalities.

felix you little bugger

lololol you need your ear boxed

thats our Gus pike, a real gentle man,

i love gus pike,

and he and Miss felicity are perfect for each other

can we have some more?

I love it! You got both Felix and Gus down perfectly!

Now Im only waiting to read your version of Gus seeing Felicity for the first time after these revelations... LOL