|Reviews for Dear Diary|
| Rayless Night 4/24/11 . chapter 1
Wow. Seriously. You nailed each character's voice - Felix's single-minded teasing, Gus' easy-going/stern scolding, and even the unseen Felicity's enthusiastic primness. It's amazing how easily I could see the characters saying their lines - really true to the original writing.
It all feels very realistic too, one of those true-to-life inbetween moments. I like that it's sweet but not too sweet.
Crit (I know this is an older fic, but I hope you don't mind.):
When Felix talks - "grinned" and "sighed" technically aren't dialogue tags, so the punctuation is off there.
"I shoulda known Felicity's diary wouldn't be interesting enough to hold them" - that's the only line that felt off. "hold them" sounds a little too formal for Felix.
But those are very minor crits. This is a great read.
| marissa-chihero67 7/10/10 . chapter 1
that was great
| sleetinthesummer 4/4/10 . chapter 1
Oh, I just love your Road to Avonlea one shots! You are so great at staying true to the characters personalities.
| stardiva 8/16/09 . chapter 1
felix you little bugger
lololol you need your ear boxed
thats our Gus pike, a real gentle man,
i love gus pike,
and he and Miss felicity are perfect for each other
can we have some more?
| konarciq 3/28/09 . chapter 1
I love it! You got both Felix and Gus down perfectly!
Now Im only waiting to read your version of Gus seeing Felicity for the first time after these revelations... LOL