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Reviews for: When It All Goes Wrong
MissJessica92
2009-09-17 . chapter 3
Great story x
kylielink
2009-08-31 . chapter 3
glad peyton and the baby are ok.
cayt326
2009-04-19 . chapter 2
Continue it!
englishpetal
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
Very dramatic. You did a good job of incorporating all of the LP tidbits we have in the promo and gelled it together quite nicely. I look forward to more of your stuff.
natarma
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
I think this sucks...NO YOUR HISTORY: THIS'S A GREAT HISTORY!... I mean, every thing about season 7: Lucas and Peyton are going disappear? And Chad and Hillary saying bye FOREVER!...THAT SUCKS!
Ok, they have dreams and goals, and deserve a good life. But OTH without these 2 characters: IS NOT OTH...I know...You know...EVERYBODY KNOWS!
So, I think OTH it'll finish this season for always; because a season without Leyton doesn't work it for me (and for anyone). Good luck with your stories, with this or any other. Please continue.Really needed!
LPaLLtHEwAY
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
Great job here! very sad story and I´d love to see it continued! =)
xoxotaylor
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
oh, i loved it. i was really hoping someone would do a story after that promo. I'd love to see it continue'd (: maybe more drama, and then a happy ending in the end? cause that'll prolly be what happens in the show. you dont' seriously think that mark would kill of his precious peyton now do you? but yeah, im kinda depressed about tall the recent news too. who knows tho. we might have all 5 next season ; im praying we do. but anyways, i really liked it, great writing, and you did a GREAT job of taking a 19 second promo and turning it into a story (:
M'sOTPisLP
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
It was a great and very very very sad story!

I'm feeling exactly how you are feeling plus a thousand and one feelings hidden underneath my skin!

6x17 was so sad and March 16th is still so far away! I'm still hoping that they'll have a girl because that's what i see them with. (Plus what is it with Scott men producing boys?? lol. well except keith)We need a GIRL! that's alive! My outlook on this is that Lucas already fixed the nursery up so that baby is NOT allowed to die. Hopefully Mark will see that!

Chad and Hil leaving absolutly broke my heart. More Hilarie than chad, but still. Idk how i'm gonna get through every week without my Peyton/Leyton/Hilarie fix. I'm like a drug addict for them!

But if they do leave and get married than LP should be allowed to have their baby ALIVE! *perferably a girl* and ride off into the sunset, BUT come back to s7 as very special guests!

And the Vlog was so sad. She about made me cry cause it looked like she wanted to shed some tears and it didn't look like she really wanted to leave her oth family willingly. so very emotional! Okay ranting done...for now anyway.

It was a great story again, i just hope it doesn't end like this *sighs* Mark oh Mark don't let it be.
Ghostwriter
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
Very interesting. But my guess is that she actually loses the baby and she deals with badly, not that Luke handles it any better. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
bendecida82
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
You can continue and give us the happy ending that OTh might not!

I dont know how I feel about chad and hilarie leaving. Honestly, if chad left, I prefer Hilarie to leave too, so at least Leyton can be off happy somewhere instead of Peyton dealing with Lucas dying or leaving her. But I also trust that Hilarie loves Peyton, and maybe she doesnt like where Mark is taking the character. I've seen it happen in sequel movies, where the main actress leaves, and then you see the movie and you understand why, because the storyline didnt fit. Ill still give OTH the benefit of the doubt, but my ultimate goal is leyton happy, so if hilarie leaving does that, Im okay. We still have fanfic.

UD soon!
lukenpeyton4ever
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
omg, so sad
blastmbs
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
Nice story!! I gotta say that I'm pissed off about the leaving part...but yet, it apparently hasnt been confirmed, Hilary doesnt say she's leaving, it looks more to me like it's a possibility but she's not quit sure yet...and other sources says she's comming back, and maybe chad too. So I guess we'll just have to wait and see...but for sure, oth wouldnt be the same, espacially that leyton is the reason the show got my attention in the first place. Oh and...spoilers says she's having the baby, only earlier than du date and ur right it says its a boy, so I guess we might have our happy ending after all...keep hoping ;)
Juzzy88
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
That was great!!
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