Some things are indescribable, like my 333 for this fic!

I felt for him...

please update add a bit more tradgety like really bad wounds or sumthin.

Holy cow. Olahvaush. Howdy. You are probably one of the best authors of fanfiction I hgave read so far, but I haven't read too many yet...oh well. Still, you arean EXTREMELYtalented author. I could feel the pain of Number Seventeen immensely... and it hurt. It hurt badly. I felt anger towards Number Eighteen for abandoning her brothers, sixteen and seventeen.
Anyways, I found a nice amount of humour within your poem...ehh...heh. "Blame it on the weatherman." forever, and ever, and ever, and ever, and ever, and ever, and ever, and ever, and ever. I hate youoh weatherman of pain and misfortune.

Wah! I'll love you Juu-kun! This is so sad... very well written, but sad. It would be cool to have a sequel, like having Juunana try and see his sister... ect... anyways, this is so good! Nice job.

Yay! someone besides me actually knows who Juunanagou and Juuhachigou are!

I think this story was more than decent, it was great. You really got Juunanagou's personality right, something I can't say for a lot of the fics on . That poor jinzouningen.

Sincerely, and please write more,

Acey

Oh my gosh! That was touching and sad. Your good at writing.

poor Juu:( that was sad and very good

Ooh...poor Juunana! *starts to cry* That was so sad! But it was really good! It got his emotions across really well! But I feel even worse for him now than I did before! Either way, really great fic! Yami

Saaaaad Story Made me want to cry

I loved it! It was so sad! I started crying!

Nice story... kinda makes you feel sorry for him...

that was really good! my poor Juu-kun.

Me: *grabs 17 and hugs him* oh Sev, i'm here for you!

17: who the f*** are you?

Me: shhhh, its gonna be okay!

17: *struggles to escape my grip before seeing a tail wrapped around my waist and realizing exactly why my hair is blonde* let go!

Me: never! MUA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

17: *more pointless attemps to escape*

Me: you know what you need? you need some . . . confort. *drags Sev to her bedroom and slams door*

17: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

anyways, that was a really good story. im gonna go see if you have any more. and, in case you dont, youd better get some more. *evil glare* unless youd rather me PELT YOU ENDLESSLY WITH E-MAILS COMPLAINING ABOUT HOW YOU HAVENT GRACED YOUR WORTHLESS SLAVES WITH ANOTHER STORY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *meniacle laughter fades as this incredibly long review comes to an end*

::teardrop:: well that was emotionally draining! You're a great writer.

!lol!