 cbadgr 2009-04-18 . chapter 1so what was the jutsu Naruto taught Konohamaru?
BTW nice out take of a specific event during your other story. |
 Major Hinata Fan 2009-04-12 . chapter 1not gonna lie this made me a little teary...though listening to sadness and sorrow probably didn't help much either.
sorry 2 hear about ur grandfather, hope things get better for u.
sorry haven't gotten 2 this story in about a month, so busy with things. |
 Zero-Nightmare 2009-04-10 . chapter 1Hello:
I want to say your stories are awesome
You really know how to catch the feelings of the moment
Congratulations
See youu next story or chapter |
 Queen of the Random Word 2009-03-13 . chapter 1This is a very good fan fic, it's touched me deeply... *cries and runs to grandma's house to give her a hug* |
 UmbreonMessiah 2009-03-10 . chapter 1Pretty moving stuff man. I wish I'd gotten into the other series a bit more, I might understand what's going on a bit better, but it's hard to miss a torn heart. That stuff stands out.
Nicely done. I'm not as sad about Sarutobi's death as I used to be, but I can see where all the writing's coming from. Nothing like this is ever easy to get over, and I only hope that by the time this reaches you that you've managed to get over the first jump.
Good to see you're still breathing. Hope to hear more from you soon!
-UmbreonMessiah |
 DemonTwins-Ichigo-Makuri 2009-03-07 . chapter 1I thought this was really good and I have to say this goes really well with the song, In Loving Memory, by Alter Bridge. I can't wait to read more and I'm really sorry about your Grandfather.
Uchiha Ichigo |
 tcl7189 2009-03-04 . chapter 1Very nice...sorry for your loss... |
 xAkix 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Sorry I took a day to review. Had a lot of homework and I haven' been feeling well myself x.x'' Anyway, this was very beautifully written and I swear I almost cried. It was a perfect memorial piece for the Sandaime. I feel really sad for Konohamaru. His grandfather is gone and Asuma too. And without going into a long pity speech about life and all that jazz, I'm sorry for your loss, Jonathan, and I wish you well and pray you the strength to carry on. |
 HinataNaruto 2009-03-02 . chapter 1aww. that was sad.. well written and still interesting as usual. :D great job. |
 WolfKeeper989 2009-03-02 . chapter 1That was sweet! I loved it. Now I hope Hinata will be okay or I will... I don't know what I will do! I will get back to reading trials of a Hanyou when I can! Thank you again for all of your support! |
 Dragon and Sword Master 2009-03-02 . chapter 1This was very good and I won't go into a long pity speech because you don't want that. Anyways, I believe your message has been given and received. Very well done Dragon Man 180
DASM |
 The Elemental Dragon Emperor 2009-03-02 . chapter 1That was gtaet its was a pearfect memory for him |