I love you! Excellent, great, well done, lovely, Aw inspiring...thanks.

wow... that's all I can say... It's really good... wow... wow...

Great story thanks for sharing.

Nice job. Cute story.

Where there's a will there's a way

EXCELLENT story, i loved reading it.

Jenni

Good stuff - keep it comin'!

excellent chapter!! Hope the next one is posted soon.

Jenni xx

WooHoo! Another chapter - but I STILL WANT MORE! Keep 'em comin'!

Very nice start. What happens next?

Hahaha, you killed off Jack. Sorry I know this wasn't meant to be funny but I did the same thing in my story and I know to Jack-lovers it was like sacrilage. But good story. I personally enjoyed Jack being dead. IDK, I've been a big Jack-hater recently. Good story. Now that you probably think I'm crazed, I'll leave.

*shrieks in Horror*

Jack can't be dead. Uh uh, no way. He's INVINCIBLE!

I love how Teal'c says Colonel O'Neill as two words, but Sam's as one.

Great story and you better post more soon. Seriously, don't just leave us on a cliff hanger like that!

Jenni

...Is this it?

I need more... This cant be it...

Please continue this fic!

Argh - this can't be all!!?? More!