Cool story! I mean... I imagined Alex as a vampire like she was in Saving Wiz Tech Part Two when she had the dark lipstick, white streaks, fangs, and scar on her head. It was very interesting but I WAS hoping for comedy and more stuff in the real world but overall nice story.

it was awesome and this story should really be on t.v..Ot is so
adventurous and funny but the best part was at the end.

GREAT JOB!

Aw. That was a nice ending! ^_^ Overall, that story was so short for me! I wanted more!

Great chapter! I loved all of the Harry Potter references and the idea of the characters hearing Kevin writing. :)

“Thank you, Kevin!” Haha.

That was basically the same as the last chapter, it was good, but It could have been longer.

Awesome. :) I feel pretty bad for Bridget, lol.

Hey now that was cool

You should do a series of fics of alex storie hoping through kevs fics that be sweet

Utterly fantastic concept for a story. Well written too. Wish it had been much longer. Glad to see Harper and Justin together, even if it was only in the story within the story.
Oh, and I love vampires...so I enjoyed Alex putting the bite on Harper.

Good. I know how hard it is to write a convincing horror story and I have to say that you have done an excellent job of it!

There are a couple of small mistakes but I don't think that they really matter.

The storyline's excellent and I really hope that you continue to write more stories like this!

One, if you're going to make references to literature or go so far as to copy/quote *Enter freely and of your own will* *Alohomora*, please cite your sources. Otherwise, it looks like you're trying to rip people off. Author's notes before or after the main body of the chapter are a perfect place for this.

Two, this chapter was a lot of the same as the last, and didn't really move the story along. It was boring and stale. I at least hope that chapter four is more exciting, or I won't be reading any longer.

Enter freely and of your own will...

Nice Dracula reference.

I like it; subtle, classic, and well-suited for a vampire story.

AWESOME! The characters are the same but different! I love it! More please!

Interesting! I don't really watch this show often, but still, I like this story. ^_^ You deserve more reviews!