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Reviews for: A Fickle Thing
Camlost
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
aww, i really like this!
RangerCM
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
This is just fantastic. You have a perfect feel for the characters. And these lines just about brought a happy tear to my eyes.

"“Of course I am. I’m talking to you, amn’t?” Mitchell countered. “C’mon, lets get going…we don’t want to miss it.”

“Miss what?”

The hostel curfew, you stupid bugger, Mitchell was about to say, but he noticed the beginnings of hope on George’s face and said, instead, “We’ll miss what comes next, of course.”"

Beautiful!!
anna
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
really good. short, but the characters come across beautifully. write more!
Wake-up Soon
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
NIICE! I like it when people write little missing scenes. :)
Awesomeness.
Anna.x.(:
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