 RangerCM 2009-03-03 . chapter 1This is just fantastic. You have a perfect feel for the characters. And these lines just about brought a happy tear to my eyes.
"“Of course I am. I’m talking to you, amn’t?” Mitchell countered. “C’mon, lets get going…we don’t want to miss it.”
“Miss what?”
The hostel curfew, you stupid bugger, Mitchell was about to say, but he noticed the beginnings of hope on George’s face and said, instead, “We’ll miss what comes next, of course.”"
Beautiful!! |