Very well done! Both your Jareth and Sarah are well done.

I really liked it but I wish you made her a little older.

Wonderful! I admit, her being 15 did kind of throw me, but to a being who's lived hundreds of years, 15 would have been perfectly acceptable.

I love that you had Jareth win in the end, no matter what he said about it being a draw. He is the Goblin King, he needs to win SOMETIMES, even against Sarah.

I also enjoyed the smut scene. I'm so glad you didn't have him stop. It was far more realistic. Only men in soppy romances would have. Not our wickedly sexy Goblin King.

I Absolutly Love the finale! The story is really great too. ROFLOL!

Great fic. Glad that Oberon was dealt with by his parents, and without causing Jareth the least ammount of trouble too.lol I felt bad for Titania having to stay married to that dork, and now she doesn't even have Olwyn or Puck for company. Poor lady.

So Jareth and Sarah live happily ever after. Again. Yay!

I don't know why anyone expects more from her than any other 15 year old dreamer, I think she does rather well with what she has. And Jareth certainly doesn't seem to mind her mood swings too much.

Thanks for posting. Looking forward to "next time". Or maybe more HLASH?

-Ellie

Me: oh, paisley! this was fantastic, and to think i was going to deleate the "new story alert" in my email because there were tons and tons of them! but no, you know what i says? i say to myself, "katie, this is by smuttmaster. THE smuttmaster! do you know how long its been since you've read smutt, self?! DO YOU KNOW?!?!?!?" and so i clicked on that link and here i-

Ben: Pah! That is NOT how it happened, dear Paisley. I will tell you what REALLY went down.

Me: Shut up, you ridiculously sexy vamp-

Ben: Here's what happened; she was looking through her email, saving all of the good-looking stories from , and deleating all of her other messages (including the one saying that rent was overdue), when she ACCIDENTALLY clicked on this one. Too stupid to read which link led to the page and which link said "deleate" she ended up at chapter 1, and was too lazy to exit out and started reading... ALL DAY!

Me: so?! i finished it in one day, and for that i am proud!! TEEheeheE!

Ben: ...You're a wicked little fool, and you shall perish in a fight with a can opener.

Me: ...erm... anywho! i really like how you slide into the story in the end, and the funny underaged-sex-thing.

Ben: She foamed at the mouth-

Me: and thats all...! hehehe... ah. more? NOW! or i kill with my can-opener!

Ben: Be careful with that thing! You almost hit me!

Me: Pah! like you would BLEED! loser...

Ben: Erm... anywho...

Me: see you later! lots of hugs and kis-

Ben: Alright that's enough!

Me: BYE!

Oh My Goblin, I love this dark and twisting tale and the last chapter was just the right touch of funny it need to light up the serious topic of the last few chapters.

Wonderful as always. You are a literary genius and I love reading your stories. I rarely write reviews or read stories before they are completed but with you I cannot help it. Keep up the good work! See you next time.

I've been away from the Labyrinth fandom for a while it would seem and when I come back I find this, WONDERFUL Paisley, I love your story's their always so full of fairy tale's I really do enjoy reading them.

I must confess to being wrapped up in the Supernatural verse for a time, it's recently come back onto TV. the show always end's on a season cliff hanger, so I've been kinda glued to each episode, wondering where the heck it's going after each episode :)

I did get the idea of the Winchester brother's ending up in the Labyrinth [Dean the oldest but shortest and Sam are Hunter's on the show, Dean's M.O. is usually a shot gun full of rock salt] Dean having wished away Sam his little brother who is a bit of a redwood if I'm honest.

I'd just LUV to see what Dean and Sam would make of his Nib's, I can just image the confrontation between Dean and Jareth, I am cruel, I know this lol!

Anyways it was nice to come back to find this waiting for me to read :)

Indeed there always is a next time when the goblin king is concerned -_-'. If he insists make her 16 in the next one. It's legal by UK laws ;)
Jareth: That won't work!
Me: You're british accent fooled me ¬_¬

Holy moly! *covers face with hands* I was expcting one of your lovely little teasing stories and this chapter has me blushing!

You know, I've read all your Labyrinth fanfics and I think this one is one of the best, or the best. I usually enjoy reading fanfics because they deal with the characters I like so I forgive the authors a lot of things that I would not tolerate in an original story, but this story, I think, stands on its own and I would enjoy it even if I knew nothing about the characters before I started reading. It's very shakespearian in spirit.

I love this story, but chapter 16 kinda scared me abit...

YOu should a story when Sarah is in high School and JAreth turns out to be her teacher becuase he's obssesed with her. Then during school they develope relationship that is not student teacher. Then he gets all pocessive and wants to make sure there are no other guys except him and he wants to rule her. Then she finds out who he is and all. It's one of thoes stories where the bad guy wins at the end. Cause I love thoes types of stories.
I love youre stories. I SUPER DUPER hope u write a story like that!

ROTFL!
This was the funniest of all chapters.
Funny thing is, I'm 15 and that would have been like Me marrying a guy in his 30's or 40's.
weird.
Though one guy I woudn't mind marrying is Cillian Murphy.
ROTFL

Oh wow, this was fantastic! I love the end of the story and it felt ... right.

Paisley, mercy on the poor goblin king.