I really want an update on this story! Please? I really like it!

hey :)
i'm really loving your new version of this story! I was a big fan of the original one, and this new version seems like it will be great!
the only fault that I found with the original story was how weak Lily was when it came to Benji. I always imagined her as a strong, fierce character.

Can't wait for the next update!!

Lily Luna Potter is the daughter of Harry and Ginny. That's the character your story is under. When FF added Lily L Potter, it changed most of the original James/Lily stories to James P/Lily Luna. Please change it back. Thank you!

hey loving the story cant wait for the next chapter that story your looking for was called Arranged and was written by powerofthelightningbolt

I wish I could help you...
This was a good chapter!

Okay, I havent read the other one in a long time, but Im really hoping that your not really thinking about putting Amos in there. Well Im pretty sure your not since this is a Lily/James story. But yeah. And i really LOVE the profanity. I swear a lot and i know its not really good but i just love it. :] I guess it makes it more realistic to me. :] And im sorry but i dont know what story your talking about. It sounds interesting though. Theres quite a few on my favorites that are really good though, if your interested in something new. :]

Anyway. Your writing is super good. And I can't wait for you to update again!

yay! It was awesome! Can't wait until next chapter! :D Yeah, it doesn't seem like Alice and Jack are a couple anymore, it makes more sense this way. :D

hey
this started really well :)
i loved the old version, the only thing was i think lily sometimes seemed a bit drippy about the whole benji thing.
i really liked the relationship with lily and james though, so more of that would be hot :)
i'd also be happy to beta if you need it
nynnerpls

hey if you want me to beta again for you
let me know :)

Hey any of us would be happy to be ur betta... All five of us could. We all rock at grammar and anything one of us misses the other would catch... send the chapters (if you decide to use us) to ... OK

Peace, Love, and Potter:
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AJTeel0203

I'd be happy to beta if you don't already have someone. But, if you do allow me to beta, just to let you know, I don't beta extremely quickly, I'll need at least a week for each chapter. Hope to hear from you!

~RHRF

Hey cosmo,

From the previous fic, i loved the intense chemistry between James and Lily, but I really didn't like how Lily couldn't get upset at Benjy for cheating on her and still wanted to be with him, it felt like she lost some dignity. I know that it's hard for her to get over him, and she still thinks she loves him, but I think that she should still be able to deny Benjy the physical part of their relationship even though she wants to get him back!

So I kinda skimmed through the Origninal. I really liked that one but it kinda made me mad that Lily was always like, "I still love him". Because really Id be realy pissed if that whole situation happened to me. But thats just me. So thats my opinion of what I didnt like. I like seeing lots of James. And i liked the funny little comments he would make. :] You could definitely do more of those and Id be pumped. :]

Hi,

First, you have a lot of great ideas, and I am very sorry not to have read your previous version of this particular story. Because of that, I don't have much input as to the outline. However, if you are in need of a beta, I volunteer my service.

TTFN: TA TA FOR NOW!
Gemm

I'd love to be your beta if you haven't chosen anyone else! I love beta-ing, so let me know. :D