wow...

That was so sweet! Also I noticed you like Princess Tutu AND Mermaid Melody! Your like the first person (besides me) who loves both of thoose shows that is on here! you should do a crossover! I put my first chapter up for a crossover between thoose shows, so I would love it if you did a crossover too b/c your a really good writer and I would the first person to read it if you posted it :)

I think that it's so sweet... If it's what Kaito really thinks... P Just a reckless thought... I wonder... Would you mind if I adopt you little Kaito playing dumb thought and simply write a fanfict out of it? Just an errant thought... Anyways, if you'll give me your permission in writing it, I'll find some time and start writing right away... P Still, if you're not giving me your permission, then the story will just go into a dark corner in my brain where all unused ideas go... ,

I don't know if I should even consider this one a fanfic because this is just a small thought from one person's point of view. For one thing it's way too short, not enough to be considered a story, and it doesn't really say much except Kaito thinking that guys sometimes should play dumb in order for a girl to feel smart.

I was kinda hoping this would be a whole story or something but it's nothing more than a single thought. Maybe turn it in to a sample journal/diary entry or something and expand it more (of course we wouldn't know if Kaito actually writes in a journal or diary... or blog even (since this is the technical information age after all )). So yeah, I don't have much critique on this one.