With angst, comes revelations.

It makes you think, makes you wonder.

And that, is what a good story is all about.

This gives me shivers...a good thing, btw!

once again another great story. it was all good.

Nice.

Even better than 'Future of Darkness'. So sad, and I love it that he still remembers.

I like it. It's good! You should write more, maybe a prequel explaining things in detail. Like how they *ahem* 'got together', why it didn't work out, and how they became enemies. Write more!