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| Reviews for Hayatou: The Astounding Switch! |
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   kikigirl4321 2/3/13 . chapter 2omg please write more its so cute so far! |
| Death101- Fox Version 12/9/12 . chapter 2 Oh my gosh. I have a feeling those pants won't be put on right. Anyways, I look forward to reading more and am curious to see how they change back. Please update soon! -D101 |
| Death101- Fox Version 11/27/12 . chapter 1 I like really like the tone of the chapter. It feels like I'm reading the manga because it doesn't seem so serious. More amusing and funny. I haven't read the manga in a long time so I have no idea how in character everyone is but I love this! Awesome job! However, I feel I should try to include something as criticism... Uh... Well I can't say there isn't enough detail because the story didn't really seem to need the detail. But if you are writing a novel you might want to consider describing the characters and area a little more. You have the right stuff since you did an awesome job describing the bodies after the switch but the other characters weren't described as much. I hope that is helpful. -D101 |
| Konekko Nekko 7/3/12 . chapter 1 Awwee! Continue pleaseee! It's like the manga "your and my secret" really you should let their minds "wander" a little bit, no? |
| MiriamTodd321 2/5/12 . chapter 2 Please update, and make them KISS! |
| Raicheda 1/23/12 . chapter 2 XD why is it when switching bodies people always try to run back into each other first, ridiculous but no matter how many times i read these i always end up in stitches curious, if hayaka is closing her eyes how is katou gonna put on a DRESS XD 3 love it |
| Mangald 8/15/11 . chapter 2 Nice story so far- keep it up! |
| MaiShibuya 7/18/11 . chapter 2 PLEASE! Pretty please with candy and cookies on top update! FOR ME! |
| Guest 6/10/11 . chapter 2 i love this story so much i would marry it! please ill do any thing for a new chapter please please please please please! with sprinkles on top! its so funny too please! XD! |
| Mina-chan27 3/19/11 . chapter 2 Im sad. Would it be too much to ask for you to continue this story? It's hilarious and I would really like to see more of it sometime soon! |
| kyyran hara 3/7/11 . chapter 2 its really update. |
| Hitomi 2/22/11 . chapter 2 please continue? Probably dont feel like it but, if you dont mind i really like your story :) |
| sammie 1/30/11 . chapter 2 the story is awsome so far please continue! |
| bargl 8/2/10 . chapter 1 its pretty good are you going to update it? I agree that its amazing only two people do anything for this i enjoy the manga |
| Tomboycountrygirl10 2/28/10 . chapter 2 yay, another chap! keep the names, a kiss (yes), romance and way for them to be together would be awesome! i like this chap n can't wait for more _ |
