Loved it. Absolutely adored everything about it. I've got this soft, dreamy smile stuck on my face and can't shake it. I applaude you. For your incredible writting and your wonderful plot bunnies. Thanks for sharing!

This was very interesting. It served its purpose well. I'm not sure if I liked it or not. I liked the story. The writing style is interesting, but I wouldn't want to read a multi-chapter fic in this style. Still, I'm glad I got exposed to it, and you wrote it very well. Thank you.

This was exceedingly well written. I enjoyed the poetic feel of the dream sequence. The question and answer dialog along with the intimate indepth descriptions made the piece vastly enjoyable to read. Desidedly no need for aide in understanding the meaning of this fic...it was self explaintory. Awesome Job!

I really don't like how you used the dialogue in this until the end, but as usual you deliver the ending with a sharp line that puts the entire story into focus. I really like how he has a second cup of coffee every day- it was quite an interesting way of putting things.
I'd also like to point out that this is in script-writing format, and to say that I dislike that format would be an understatement. However, I read on despite the aformentioned oh-so-hated format that it was in. I always read these chapters in wait for that final line and you delivered without flaw. I must say the end of your stories are always the best, as rude as that sounds. If this wasn't already on my favorites and alerts I would do so now.

aw! that was so sweet!
poor zexy, he had to wait so long for demmy D:
<3

that was really clever... and i watched the video :)
very nice, its cute, and i like the play style ^.^
lovely writing as usual too

yay! an update!
i'll have to visit you while you're at camp then! X3

That's really sweet ^^
Oh, good luck at the Forensic Science program.

Aw, now that was cute! I actually really rather liked the screenplay format you used - it's quite a refreshing change from what I usually see in most fics. Not to mention, I think you did a wonderful job. Also? Xiggy was hilariously well done. ^__^

Have fun at the Forensic Science program!

"Demyx linger, but minds his own business." I think linger should be lingers...

That several thousand different types of cute and creativity; the new style is interesting, and I definitly like it! I like Demyx's personality change, it was fun and silly to read him get nervous and jittery. D'aw~

Zexion was an interesting character, most certainly. I actually thought that that last part might happen. I predicted something along the lines of it. Zexion was almost painfully polite to Demyx though, in the beginning. He was sending a few mixed signals. Maybe the occasional smile?

I am in love with the Fantasy series, and I can't wait for the next installment~!

It took him long enough, lol. Silly Demyx. It was odd at first, but I enjoy reading plays, so I liked the format. It always takes me a little while to adjust, but...Have fun on your Forensic Science trip! Berkely is in California, yes? I get to go to UC Davis for a Latin Competition; I'm pretty excited :D. Anyway, great addition. Can't wait for more!

Loved it. I especially loved the whole 'play' type thing. I don't know the word right now...

Anyways, great job! It was seriously kick ass!

You have such a great grasp on figurative language! I was really captivated through the whole thing. My only problem is that now I am cursed into craving some chowder. Your description was absolutely mouth watering!

oh caramel candy sounds really good right now.

i love it :)
there's nothing to say but that, the writing is so smooth. Can i touch it? lol
lovely, very lovely ^.^