A great story. Very good.

Too bad not enough Wiffy!

Cute and sweet. But there needs to be a follow-up about the two ** people on the beach. And the other Scoobies' reactions, of course.

Script format dialogue isn't the most readable.

very intresting :)
Love wiffy! AND your story! Keep writing!
YOu're on the wrong category though, you posted on SON O_o

I love Wiffy and the story but I think you are on the wrong forum unless this is going to a crossover with South of nowhere.

good story and all but wrong category

WRONG ** CATEGORY, MAN.

That is all.