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Panda
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
I was giggling all the time, I swear. xD

And Riku is a stalker~

Great work!
Kanariya674
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
This story is great! It's written very well and man do I love that last line - it closed this story perfectly!
Hikari-Sora1
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Beautiful...simply...the describing of the sex was so luscious~ Damn you're good D:
ShadowYin-Yang
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
Very nice ending. It was perfectly written in every way possible!

Very hot!
Keuraki-SoraXRiku
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
Technically i shouldn't be reading this ...

Oops.

But really i don't care.

You're a great writer, you kow that? Ever tried to publish a book? Because i swear i'd read it if you did. I'll be the first one to buy it! XD

Keep up the devious smiles and pairings, kay??

Yeps.

Regards,
Keuraki-SoraxRiku
Fantasy.Maker
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
That was... entirely too hot for my own good. Hahahaha. Oh Riku you peeping tom. Don't you know that good things come to those who wait? The double entendre was not intentional but can be giggled over.

Brilliant! Brilliant! And this is just the medicine to get anyone through sickness. Loved this so much, especially the private conversation Sora and Roxas were having that Riku couldn't hear. Such a pretty, private moment and you executed it very well. Saw it perfectly – saw EVERYTHING perfectly – as I was reading. I give you Oreos and Pringles for such a good job! XD
Shoes-san
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
>:) So deliciously perverted!
Newbie
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
YAY!XD XD XD
My favorite threesome!Or similar to a threesome.XP
Anyways, I LOVED IT!
Could you write a actual threesome with them?
And good luck with your other stories, bye!
signed, Newbie
Keira-93
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
As a twin this was a little creepy, but I loved it all the same, expecially the end.
CottonCandyHaze
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
Simply fantastic >ww> The thought never occurred to me but..still.. Bravo.
Funny too, but then, I'm weird like that >ww>
But then.. As long as it has Sora and Roxas together with Roxy being the seme, I could care less what the fudge Riku or anyone else does >w>
Lyn
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
This absolutely demands a sequel.
KnightlyLady
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Um. That was epic. Don't like Roxas/Sora. But. Wow. Haha. And Riku at the end? Classic ^-^ I love your writing style, and I'm so happy you have more stories. I shall read them all very soon :D
sophiii
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
DUDE LIKE WOAH. Hot much? *nervous laugh* Right. I'm going to find a meaning for this review. Really. Okay I seriously just sat here for about 10 minutes. This is a pointless review, because I am speachless. Well maybe not, because here I am ranting away. *nervous laugh vol II* I _really_ like your writings. Is that a word? I like this ficcie (I'm quite enthusiastic about making up words today) very much. I'm going to add it to my favourites, and tell my friend to read it. I was talking about this to her yesterday, about how I read half of it like weks ago but never got to the end of it, and about how I was going to finish reading it one of these days, and she sounded vair vair vair excited. I shall report to her and tell her that it's quality HOT PORNY BOYSEX. She'll love it, I know it. If she doesn't, I'll have to befriend her. Yup.
Tekko
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
...Iwanttohaveyourbabies.

me = stalker.

:D

~Tekko
Cheshire
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Fuck, I love you. That was way too hot for me to be reading when I need to get to school in 15 minutes.

So yeah. Kudos.
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