Well done. The only thing I caught was that you mentioned Naruto's dark hair, when it's actually bright, or simply light. You did a wonderful job setting the tone/mood for this piece as well (I feel so calm now ^_^). All in all, this was a fabulous vignette. Great job, and thanks for sharing!

cute

thats sweet. i love it

aww...
so sweet and cute...
hope you make more naruhina sweet moments!

Short, but sweet!! I like it.