Well, a fitting end.

Still need spell check.

finally ash unleashes his true potential. i never was really a fan of pearlshipping since dawn is way too young for ash but whatever. nice way to wrap up this chronicles. now continue on with the main series!

Stop rushing chapters. Your grammar is beginning to look like what it was when you started writing.

Otherwise, good chapter. About how long until Ash is called up?

finally a nice update. its ashamed we couldn't see ash in action. oh well, hopefully things heat up. any chance u'll put ash's hidden aura powers into the mix? i've seen a lot of authors esp. johan07 do that. anyways keep it up!

Ash should take Sceptile!

Some villians don't know when to quit do they?

Oh btw its Hunter J not with the ay in the end okay?

Secptile, Donphan, or Glalie are good choices. Though that's up to you.

interesting stuff...& i 2nd what ketchum kid says. the only story recently made that has pokemon & DIGIMON in it is my story, "the crossroad odyssey." & this 1 has a different twist compare to all the other p/d stories i've read. anyways forget about me, i hope u continue ur story & if u can read mine & give me some good advice.

Forgot what section I was in. Anyways, you still need more description in the story. Currently, it comes off rather quick.

Well, this is a suprise. Just hurry up with A New Light. There's not many good stories in the Pokemon/Digimon section nowadays.

One thing. Should the storyline cross with A New Light (e.g. battle spills into Kanto, Zane needs help, ect.), will both stories be updated with similar chapters, or will you focus your effort on one story only?