Utter crap.

This is very nice. Excellent attention to detail, and you stayed admirably with the five senses, which carried you through without overintellectualizing. A terrific exercise of imagination. Elegant!

Quite a believable story; that's exactly how I think Darla would feel when she "awoke." Very very good story.

Wonderful work with Darla. You do amazing things with sensual description and what was probably her state of mind upon awakening. Perfect.

You're wonderful with Darla. A great exploration of what it must have been like to be resurrected in a human body, human senses with a vampire mind. Nice touch to add immediate distrust of Holland!