Great transformation scene! I can so relate to that corset! I've been synched (sp?) into one of those a couple times for some of the musical theatre I've done. Challenging to sing when you can't breath!
I ran across 1 typo - in the paragraph where the guy with the hat boxes enters you had "the" instead of "to".
Sorry I've been absent for a while myself - life/work getting in the way... Looking forward to future chapters!

Haha, thanks for the welcome and for the beat-down! I loved your description of how Murdock changed when Hannibal showed up, that's why I love him. He knows how to act crazy and make ppl laugh, but he's a soldier at heart!
Can't wait for more Ness/A-Team interaction!
great job!
~redrose7856

YAY THE TEAM WERE THERE! I SAW THEM. Ness kicked some serious ** there! She rulez (with a 'z' as she more than rules) I hope the A Team plan to wipe the floor with the evil gits who hurt Murdok. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I caught up! Woot! Amazing work, I'm eager to see what'll happen next. And since you're apparently taking requests from reviewers, can I request that at some point in this fic, B.A. beats up someone to protect Murdock? B/c as much as those two bicker, it's clear they're close.
Also, I love the setup here! I can't wait to see Ness' reaction to Hannibal!
Excellent job on this, can't wait for more!
~redrose7856

Holy cow! Ness in a dress! I love it! Dress up game! I love it! Murdock bashing! Made me sad actually. Poor boy, what'd he ever do?! GO FASTER NESS SAVE MURDOCK PLEASES!! It was exciting and gripping and I'm ready for the next chapter please. I wanna see some butt whoopin' ! I betting Ness will kick some bottom. With feeling. UPDATE!!

PLEASE tell me that B.A. beats Mammoth up! Grr, that guy is rlly gettin on my nerves! HANDS OFF MURDOCK, YOU CREEP!!
Love it still and always will.
Cheers!
~redorse7856
PS: did u hear who they cast as Face in the new A-Team movie?

Haha, this is great! I LOVE A-TEAM! You've done a great job of keeping Murdock in character, and I'm pleased that there are like, 25 more chapters for me to read! YAY! :D
Happy writing and reading!
Cheers!
~redrose7856

Howdy! (I'm in a cowgirl mood!) I love it. It was definately worth the wait and uber long (50% extra free!). Yay for team cameos too, I'm excited already! Darn that phone and its coin stealing abilities. I also love the ABC game that was adorable, as is Disneyland (I've only been to Disneyland Paris, and my freind got her pizza stolen by Captain Hook. Blasted Pirates!). Wows are in order also for Murdock's table dancing skills, I know this is hard because I once fell off a table (but I landed on a chair so it was okay). And I'm so glad you updated! I'm singing with joy! I hope you'll keep this going and also I noticed your planning another one too! :D I'm happy now! See you next update (preferably soon so darling Ness can save Murdock again, he's always in trouble) update please!

Dear Shadarus,
I am submitting my demands to you in reveiw form, because I can. So here they are:
1)COME BACK! I misses you :( T-T (and other assorted sad faces)
2)Update! Now please. Pretty please with cookie dough and twinkies?
3)Actually that was it.
Hope to hear from you soon (in the form of "Have an update")
Your sincerly,
Cap'n Awesome

P.s. Write please. I miss you!

i hate bad brain days

what a find. that a great way to give some one a present letting them dig through what you just getting rid of or selling.

Murdock has a way of getting under any ones skin poor new guy

i love all his presents.. the way she messed with the mammoth was perfect

It's too late to log in :(. OMG UPDATE!! :D. Behl seems to have aquired the letter 'M'. Is this new? I still love the guy, tell us more about him! Poor Ness again, will she ever get better? She can have my hayfever tablets if she wants? No I don't want them either. Any how, sorry to tell you but... I'm adicted to two updates a day now. You'll have to write faster :P.

oh *Twilight Zone Theme* Spooky! I made Rocky Road today. This was better. Poor ol' Ness! Don't let her leave Murdock, he can help, I'm sure of it. Maybe Ness would like some Rocky Road? It might cheer her up? If only you could add food to a review. They should do something about that. Keep writing!