 devoted2clois 2009-10-17 . chapter 6omg thats awesome:)
weres the rest, wink wink nudge nudge
jess |
 elly harper 2009-10-05 . chapter 1 i'm really enjoying your story. i hope you add more soon |
 susie 2009-09-02 . chapter 6 keep going i love this |
 Gollum4077 2009-07-24 . chapter 6 oh hey! can you please write another chapter?! thta was good! i love charlotte and gabby! they're just such awesome characters! |
 Gollum4077 2009-07-24 . chapter 4 yeah- no thanks on the cookies. um- your speeling could probs be edited a bit. plus ur punctuation, but still it was great. the emotional things- pretty good. interesting to see how emotionally concerned gabbi is for steve. and maybe deep down she still does love him! who knows? |
 Gollum4077 2009-07-24 . chapter 1 yeah- cool, that's very interesting. i agree with the whole- getting steve and gabby back in romance etc...claire's a great character- but something just works between gabby and steve. good one! |
 Roxanne 2009-05-10 . chapter 6 Hello,
your story seems great so far, i can't wait for the next chapter. your a good writer and you seem to manage being descriptive without to much medical jargon. it is really good. hope you write more soon.
Roxy:)
P.S. the one thing i would change is... you need more medicine (blood and guts)it is a medical drama. but what you write is great! |
 OoIndigoBlueoO 2009-04-26 . chapter 6Thanks for the update. Another great chapter I like the friendship/interactions between Charlotte and Gabby. Looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
 nataliee47 2009-04-23 . chapter 5i love this story
gabby&steve 4ever
when will the nxt chapter be up ?
:) |
 OoIndigoBlueoO 2009-04-02 . chapter 5Slightly disturbing chapter, but it was written very well the way you describe Steve's thoughts and emotions is amazing. Looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
 nataliee47 2009-03-20 . chapter 4:)
loved it again
ur emotional are really good
u've got an awesome story going keep it up
lovein reading them
xx. |
 OoIndigoBlueoO 2009-03-20 . chapter 4Another fanstastic chapter! I loved the interaction between Gabby and Charlotte and the way you expressed Steve's emotions was just brillant. I too hope that you put Steve and Gabby back together. Looking forward to reading more. :) |
 nataliee47 2009-03-10 . chapter 3awesome again
really hope u put them back together :) |
 amy'foxy'fox 2009-03-09 . chapter 2Ah I love this story so dar. It's really nice to see some Gabi/Steve fanfic (actually its just really nice to see any All Saints fanfic) I really love how you have linked Gabi and Steve's past connection into the story, it's made the whole thing seem more real and I love the sensitive Steve angle you are writing.
Can't wait for more! |
 nataliee47 2009-03-05 . chapter 2once again love it :D haha
keep up the good work |