 Silvara 2009-05-09 . chapter 1I always like to find such Zack Sephiroth interaction. It's interesting and refreshing. You could improve some point by developing the ideas, but the fic is pretty decent as it is now.
Thank for this one. |
 MoonlightTyger 2009-04-24 . chapter 1This story is so awesome =) Zack's such a good friend ^^ Loved the part about, "You're not cold...You know what? You're sad." Very insightful ^^ (He's totally right, don't we all know it? Except Sephiroth, that is XD)
But anyways, yes, wonderful little fic. Your Zack and Seph stories are always so great to read; thanks for another awesome piece! =D |
 Prisonerksc2-303 2009-03-26 . chapter 1That...was...beautifully told. I am in love with your story telling especially your Zack and Sephiroth fics. They're the best! I love how it captures their relationship and how Zack sees the General as not being cold...just sad. Magnificent job!! Keep it up! Loved it! |
 Ardwynna Morrigu 2009-03-08 . chapter 1Poor General, got some rather unsavory food for thought there. |
 KohakuWolf 2009-03-06 . chapter 1"Like you built this wall around yourself, and you don't like anyone to see through it. But at the same time, you're hoping someone will."
That line is just... wow. So full of wisdom and understanding. This is so beautiful. I love reading fics that are able to accurately depict what Sephiroth was like before the Nibelheim incident. Really deep, and really well written; this story is definitely one of my new faves. :) And having Zack be the one to point out Sephiroth's sadness was the icing on the cake of a brilliant fic. Keep writing stories like this, please! They're all so lovely and insightful. ^^ |
 KyuubiPandoraChan 2009-03-04 . chapter 1Sweet, oh man I've miss your story so much. You got to do more Seph and Zack. Their friendship is really really nice in your fic. XD |
 Tikigod784 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Very nice to hear from you again! I've been missing the epic tales of Zack and Seph. Good to see that you're still in the genre. Question: Ever gonna continue your KH fics? If so, I've got a scenario: Seph and Riku. Completely canon, but just as funny. It's interesting to imagine how those two would interact (Sora and Zack would just be goofy). |
 Chibi Cheesecake 2009-03-03 . chapter 1(...teehee 'Jensen'. ...OH GOD, BRAIN, NO WE ARE NOT CROSSING OVER SUPERNATURAL AND FF7. IT IS NOT HAPPENING. S-STOP THAT.)
This is really cute! I really liked Seph's bewilderment when Zack says the other men think of him as a father sometimes, that really struck me, that Seph had trouble wrapping his mind around that idea.
And the last few lines, ooh. I'd love to see you expand on that idea in the future, that Seph is afraid Zack is the only good thing in his life. ^^ |
 CSKazaam 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Aw! **hugs Seph!** This story was so bittersweet!
**snickers @ Zack calling him General Seph.** XD
Oh sque! I love the idea of the guys thinking that coming to Seph for advice is like talking to their dads. X3 But man, that's so sad that Seph doesn't understand what that's like. ;__;
And poor Seph, trying to deny that he was sad, but then starting to doubt that he wasn't, with Zack being the only bright spot in his life. ;__; **hugs him again.**
Awesome story! ^^ |
 jazzybutclassy28 2009-03-03 . chapter 1I enjoyed it, i like how in character everyone is. We all know press conferences aren't good for poor Sephy :) |
 Fyre_dragon777 2009-03-03 . chapter 1 OMG ok first off this was really good (as usual) second let me just say that i am so glad you are posting again I was really begining to worry you wouldnt be writing anymore. im a huge fan, ur probably my favorite fanfiction writer, and l i love the way you write both Sephiroth and Zack weather its for FFVII or KH you write them both exactly as i imagine them and i really dont think the games show enough of them (especially Sephiroth) even with crisis core. btw the only reason i havent reviewed b4 now is because i read from a PSP and if u have ever tried typing from the infernal thing u understand (it takes FOREVER) so hope to see more of your amazing stories soon.
sry if this was long/off topic i was just really glad to see a new story from you |
 ladysubaru83 2009-03-03 . chapter 1darn i thought it was yaoi XP heehee but its good hee keep up the good work. |
 RainFlame 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Aww this was very sweet XD I love how you portray Sephiroth in your stories. |
 Amanda Fair 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Oh my gosh, I loved this! I've read all of your FFVII stuff and it's is amazing. They way you portray Zack and Sephiroth is awesome. I mean, it's not too sappy, or gay, or stupid...it's just plain awesome. You capture the two of them so perfectly! I love it. Awesome job! |
 Crystal Rose of Pollux 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Ooh, yay for more Zack and Seph friendship cuteness! And yay for Zack foiling the reporter's plans!
LOL at "If you ever become Jensen's twin, you should apologize!"
And ooh... Zack realizing that Seph was too afraid to care...so poignant!
Zack being the only bright spot... ooh, wow... |