|Reviews for The Chosen Ones|
| Yoda1976 5/8/13 . chapter 14
Hope you continue this. Its a lot of fun. I really liked how you got Corey out of the way.
| Sailor GaOn Donut 11/22/12 . chapter 14
| Tweeky 11/13/12 . chapter 14
Excellent introduction of Faith in sunnydale and I loved the hot Faith/Xander sex-dance:) in the Bronze and Faith reaction to suddenly being ditch by Xander was funny. Anyway I wonder how it will be before Faith de-virges Xander? I hope that it won't be a seven minute "Wham, Bam, Thank you Xander" bonkfest only to be kicked out after he's got dressed. Now that Faith's in town I'm wondering how long it will be before that revolting creature Kakistos appears in Sunnydale? I suspect Xander and Oz are going to get involved which will result Kakistos's well deserved death. I personally would like to see a Faith/Xander pairing as I think they'd understand each other as both come from deprived and abusive backgrounds (both have abusive alcoholic parents) and I think they'd be good for each other.
Anyway Buffy sure fucked up with both Xander and Willow at the Bronze even if she had good intentions, I don't know what those demon-Nazi's aka the Scourge want with her but it can't be good. I wonder what Anakin is going to do and when will the Kirgan next make his appearance?
| DennSedai 11/6/12 . chapter 14
Eeeeppppp... The Scourge in Sunnydale? Oh crap.
| Quathis 11/3/12 . chapter 14
Fast pace this chapter. Xander goes from being fray adjacent to being desirable by two Slayers. Willow shows steel in her spine and Faith starts meshing with the Scoobies. Good set up with Buffy being overcome by superior numbers and tactics with Anakin on the way. Looking very exciting! Until next time.
| EVA-Saiyajin 7/23/11 . chapter 10
awesome story, very well written and detailed. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
| whatweareafreaidof 5/24/11 . chapter 13
First great story and I love it. You she akin as a young man bit hint at things like his kids that showed he is a old man
Love how you have him teaching xander. Don't have oz with the force. Is Buffy going to go after banking. Faith is great have her go after xander and not for love but becouse she scariest and she thinks his power will protect het
| mwbib 5/12/11 . chapter 13
Love your story... looking forward to more...
| marc 4/19/11 . chapter 13
| Quathis 3/13/11 . chapter 13
And the dynamics change once again. Dang, now Xander's officially single, though still on good terms (relatively speaking) with Cordy and he's learned a few things about Anakin as well. Faith's appearance isn't far away, Kakistos is on the hunt, and Buffy's getting back into school. Things are really looking forward here, plus we got a great laugh out of Anakin's Yoda-speak. Good times. Until next time.
| Naosj 11/21/10 . chapter 3
It would have been more fun to keep Giles and the rest guessing.
| Naosj 11/21/10 . chapter 2
I can't tell how relieved I was when I read the part about Xander being knocked around. If this was another Halloween fic, I think I would have avoided this part of fan fiction forever.
| turtle titan 10/18/10 . chapter 12
Interesting chapter I can't wait for the next one.
I've been wondering who the last two characters are oing to be ever since you brought in the kurgan. Will on of them be a Sith? Maybe the emperor or Darth Revan From Kotor?and if so you could have them try and form an army or at least take an aprentice. I think Having Xander encounter a Sith and the repercussions of that encounter could be great especially if its another aprentice who like Xander sort of idolizes the force and his master at this point would be fantastic especially the aftermath of dealing with one who is so similar and yet so fundamentally different. Anyways great story and I cant wait for the next chapter
| Evilclone 10/11/10 . chapter 12
Nice culture references, and yes, I do believe I spotted a Firefly reference. Now we just need to get one of them to say Shiny, and all is good with the world. Interesting section, not particularly long, but overall, thumbs up.
| Quathis 10/9/10 . chapter 12
Well, it is a good look at how Anakin's progress with our world is going, as well as his internal dilemmas. His conversation with Xander was ironic to me. I too saw the similarities, but also the differences. Anakin complained about the universe not being as he thought it should, while Xander complains that he himself wasn't enough. Hopefully the apprentice will not repeat the mistakes of the Master, even though the apprentice might never learn those mistakes. Looking forward to what lies in store for the teens at school. Until next time.