Gulp.
Wasn't THAT interesting.
I liked it, in a way that makes me want to delete my browser history. Haha.

Holy shit, that was intense.

"Stop looking at me like you want to fuck me"

*dead*

wow.

Are you going to write more?

:O
*sings* You are amazing...
That was incredible. Just... guh. I wish I'd written it. :P

Fabulous.

Ok, I do have to say I liked it, because I did.

But Elphaba...scared me. The pointed teeth and firey eyes? Didn't think I'd like it after getting to that point and it freaked me out...but I liked it anyways.

Well done.

This is excellent. The dialogue made me smile and the description at the start was brilliant. Good job.

Oh this was so much fun to read.

“Stop looking at me like you want to fuck me.”
^^ Why Miss Elphaba, such language! I wish this was a movie or TV show... because in my head Elphaba said that with a completely straight face. And Glinda sort of just gapes, open mouthed... so amusing.

M. Best kind of Gelphie... mostly onesided(but perhaps not QUITE completely) and totally forbidden. Lovelove.

I feel some need to put some sort of innuendo in this review, but I don't want to freak out the rest of ffdotnet... so I'll behave for now *wink*

Love you, Mel
xoxox
Tiggy

For me, Mel? Thanks. Even if I laughed at the first paragraph.

Beautifully Horrific... I love that paradoxical description of Elphaba (Granted, is there anything of Elphie that isn't a paradox?)

And then more laughing that is highly inappropriate at their conversation. (Oh Glinda, can you do anything without making me laugh?)

You really cheered me up Mel. Thanks.