This was just an all-around good time. Way to go. Also, have a nice day.

Well, well, soldier...

Whoa...Just...whoa!

Y'know? I actually believe Maryse DOES have a thing for women.
I mean, Hel-low! Don't think I haven't noticed how she lies down on her opponents when she pins them! LOL
That's gotta be THE most sexy cover I've EVAR seen. LMAO
Man, this thing has potential for a sequel. But oh well, I'll take what I can get.

Nice, very nice work, marine. You did good.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

great story. and i have a request, can you make a story about
melina/maryse but then turn into melina/mickie. please?

trying to catch up on reading after 5 weeks isn't so much fun, especially when I'm super busy but oh well lol. Great story though, just watched the segment on youtube. I love the idea of these 2! Keep up the good work.

i lovee it !!
this was awesome.

after smackdown and reading this story, i kinda feel that there is a love triangle between michelle, melina and maryse. haha imagine...but how michelle protected maryse idk it's crazy

but anyways this was awesome. i love all of your stories!!

That was really hot. I guess I wasn't the only one having "thoughts" when Maryse was crawling over Melina. I was thinking, "Kiss her already, damn!"

Very nice. I love it.

~J

Ooh, I definitely felt something going on with those two last night. Is it just me, or does Maryse always seem to touch the Divas in not-so-innocent ways? :] It might just be me, lol. But anyways, this was really good, and I was thinking about writing them, but you beat me to the punch! :D

Great work as ALWAYS. :)

xo,
Gabbi.

Amazing!
Thanx so much!I like how you based it on Monday!
It was perfect for this!Melina and Maryse commentating!Melina's dress riding up!
Amazing!
Thanx!I loved it!
!

Ohh, this is going to be good. I love it, Melina is awesome and so is Maryse. Very good pairing!

Love it
Maryse/Melina would make an awesome couple

Oh my gosh that was so hot & spicy lol

Great work ,not what i expected.
It's actually really good , although i'd rather see another match at Wrestlemania 25. Because eventhough i like Melina it would be her 3d time in a row that she has a match at Wrestlemania , and i feel like that the other Divas should get a match too. In my opinion Mickie vs Trish (Since it's a rumored that she willbe having a match at Wrestlemania 25), or Lita would be a great match. Feel free to throw your 2 cents in.
Oh and just so you know it's Pourquoi es-tu si belle?
Keep up the good work.

GRTZ Kai1994!

LOVED IT!

I knew instantly from the title that this would be Maryse-related, which made me happy. I haven't tried my hand at writing anything with her yet, but I'd love to someday, when all this craziness around me dies down.

Looks like I wasn't the only one who had femslashy-type thoughts last night after the encounter with Melina and Maryse. This might not have been your steamiest, but who cares, it was still awesome! King does say some weird things...I kinda miss the "puppy" comments though.

Great work hunn, and again, sorry for the sudden rush off MSN last night :(

Tina