Well once again, I'm sorry. It seems that you have alot of writing potential, and that's good in a person. But, I saw this story on a Livejournal group called "Phantomsues" I'm not sure if you heard of them, but they basically take stories out of this site and "spork" as in, nitpick them because the characters are "mary-sues" to them. This story was their latest spork, and I really hate to see other people's hard work be ruined just like that.

What I told you in my last review is supposed to help out alittle, but if you don't want to do it, that's fine with me. But be aware of the Phantomsue community, if you don't want to see your work be nitpicked apart.

I'm sorry but, this story is extremely bad.

No offence, but there are extreme flaws everywhere. For example, so your "character" lives in Austin, Texas, and they go to a Nickelodeon Studios, that would take DAYS to get to, because there's one in Florida, and another in California.

And another thing, i notice a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, and the "maker" is named Butch Hartman.

also, it doesn't take a day to make a new DP episode, it takes months.

I'm sorry to sound mean, but you really need to do heavy refining on this story. Better yet, delete it and do a bit of research, as well as reading up on storywriting and character creation, before writing another.