good job, just a couple of grammatical errors here and there

omc i love ian, he's so amazing

awesome start, i've been looking for a good Host fanfic, can't wait to read the rest!

oh what is going to happen next. Are Mel and Wanda going to get caught? I can't wait to read what happens next. Good Job

WHAT WAS THE BLOOD? lol

I WANT TO KNOW

I can't wait to find out what's really going on! This is a great story, update again soon : )

I absolutely LOVE this fanfic! the storyline is amazing! it's so great how u put so much thought into each writing positively FLOWS. sometimes i forgot i was not reading the work of an established author.i would LOVE to hear about your inspiration and thought process for this i can say is...amazing...

An awesome chapter! Now I am realy worried for Sunny and Jodi too! So wanda isn't getting treated? I thought she was sick too?

Any way, we just have to know whats happening to Sunny!

Kat

Great chapter. You left me wanting more. Keep up the good writing.

Great once again.:) But this story has my mind thinking of so many questions...i can't wait for most of them to be answerd!

Update soon!

Good story. I look forward to more.

Awesome. I am so excited for the next instalment! Can't wait. Keep up the wonderful work.

bbissocute

Awesome chapter. I hope we get to see whats happening to poor Sunny too!

Kat

good job. You could make your chapters longer..lol. Can't wait to see what happens next.

So far, wonderful plot. I cannot wait until the next gripping portion. Keep up the lovely work. :)

bbissocute